Believe me, Part 2

Sep 19, 2011 00:54


Anthony flipped them around on the bed, without breaking the kiss. He lay heavily on top of Ian, slowly grinding their hips together and kissing him with a passion he barely knew he had inside him. Anthony wasn’t sure why, but he felt an urge to protect Ian, to save him from his internal demons. The thought of Ian never being himself again was ( Read more... )

believe me, monthly challenge: first kiss, slash, nc-17, smosh

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mutual_death September 30 2011, 02:02:00 UTC
I swear I left a comment when I first read this story...WEEKS ago. Lol I'm in awe of how great your writing is. I find it hard to believe you haven't posted something sooner! Keep writing girl...I need more of your hot, passionate sexy time between Ian and Anthony!!

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boredomdelux December 18 2011, 16:02:19 UTC
Oooooh, so people haven't completely forgotten my humble contribution the the slash just yet! XD It makes me really happy that you took the time to go back and read this :) It's a great feeling to know that you like what I have written here.

As I have probably said somewhere before; all my "writing-skills" - if you can call them that - comes from reading tons of slash. Mainly on this A7X-comm here on LJ XD So, reading and learning really helped me. I even got way better grades in school because of it!
And as for not posting very much, I know, and it's a little sad cause I also want to contribute alongside all the amazing writers here. It's just that school takes up a lot of my time, as I'm really trying to get good grades and this is the year before graduation (aka the year where you learn the most new things), and so I don't really have much time for writing. BUT, I am working on something right now, though I don't yet know how it will turn out X) But I hope I will get it out soon!

Thanks so much for reading<3

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boredomdelux December 18 2011, 16:05:03 UTC
* "writing-skills" come form reading slash
#grammarnazi
Sorry, English is only my second language, and sometimes writing long sentences confuses my brain and it results in grammar fails XD

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skoomaaddict March 18 2013, 14:19:00 UTC
I know it was like more than one year ago you wrote this and that I'm really late but I just found your LJ and I LOVE your writing!! <3

I was so beautiful!! Probably one of my favourite smuts because they are showing such true love, passion, and lust.

And how cool is it that you are Norwegian!! :O Your English is so good!! I'm from Sweden and I could not write half as good as this!

Jag är helt förälskad i sättet du för ihop Ian och Anthony på! Jag älskar hur Anthony är så beskyddande! (I hope you can understand Swedish because I can not write in Norwegian, only understand it *feeling embarrassed*)

Thank you so much once again for writing this!! <3 It made my day!

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boredomdelux March 21 2013, 11:25:02 UTC
Næmmen hei, Söta bror! :D
Så kult å treffe en svenske her! Så glad du likte historia :)

Haha, it's funny because I look back at this now, and I find so many flaws and things that don't make sense X) But glad you liked it nonetheless! I want to write more, and I think I've gotten better too, but I'm really busy with school this year and I just can't get anything going. I'm working on a SmoshGames fic though (in case you're interested in that), though I don't know when (or if ever) it will be published, so *hush-hush*

However I love that people are still reading this, so thank you!! Really happy you liked it :))

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skoomaaddict March 21 2013, 17:27:20 UTC
Of course it has its flaws, but its the big picture that counts and in this case its perfect!!

Everything you look back at gives you the feeling that you could have done it better! (maybe that's because I'm such a perfectionist!) That's the meaning of "Practice makes Perfect" or "Övning ger färdighet" in Swedish ;)

Omg yees!! I love SmoshGames fics ;) I really really hope that you will publish it! :D

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