Unsympathetic - part 3

[bouncy_cat]

Series: Sympathetic
Title: Unsympathetic - part 3
Rating: PG13
Warnings: mpreg, overuse of medical terminology
Summary: Steve digests the news. He's not happy.

Comments

[tommyhanson]

".... lets not forget about low stress tolerance, mood swings, agitation and irritability.”

Steve suddenly perks up. “Hey doc,” he says, and he’s got the look on his face that says he’s about to blow something up, “with those extra organs being inside his body…is it possible that he’s had higher estrogen levels before now?”

Davis raises an eyebrow. “It’s possible.”

Next to Danny, Steve’s body twitches. And keeps twitching. And he’s stopped breathing. And Danny is going to kill him. “Fuck you, Steven.” He says succinctly

Steve barks out a short laugh before reigning himself back in. He’s biting his lip and slowly turning an alarming shade of red.

Danny pulls his hand away and smack Steve’s arm. “Alright, you ass. Let it out before you give yourself a brainbleed.”

And Steve laughs. “I told you.” He cackles. “I said it the very first day we met.” And he keeps laughing. “I told you-” he takes a gasping breath, “told you you were sensitive.”

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[kitmerlot1213]

I like that Danny's already bonded with the baby, and Steve's worry for Danny's health is damn adorable.

And I like that Steve and Danny are able to laugh at all of the stuff they are going through--it will help them deal better :)

[lazy_8s]

So glad that Steve stayed right where he was in that chair and seems to be in for the long haul with Danny. 'Cuz, from what the doctor relayed, I don't think that this is going to be easy at all. Loved the update! :)

[gyri]

Oh, I LOVE that you tied this story in to that "you're too sensitive" comment from way back in the pilot. Brilliant, just brilliant!

[hawaii50fangirl]

I'm amazed that you can make this flow so well and seem plausible. Good job.