LJ Idol Week 20 - Love Means Never Having to Say

[boxsofrain]

I was hidden in a wooden box

Comments

[selucius]

That was hauntingly beautiful.

[boxsofrain]

Thank you! :)

[bewize]

This was creepy.

Judging your writing alone, this was very well done, but it's one of those entries that makes me want to discuss the character and how much I wish she'd found help before the end.

Her final sentiment is so jarringly wrong to me that I have a hard time understanding it, her, and by default, the story.

I really don't mean that to suggest that you haven't mastered your craft, because you have, but I also wanted to comment on the content of the story itself.

Well done. And creepy. :)

[boxsofrain]

Thank you! This was exactly what I was going for. I wanted to tell a creepy story about a woman one can not identify with. :)

[baxaphobia]

Creepily chilling. Good entry.

[boxsofrain]

Thank you!

[darkprism]

I became the oxygen he now breathes; I became the excited molecules that still surround him to keep him warm; I became the wind that gives him a hug every morning on the way to his car.

<3 <3 <3

I loved this. Excellent work, lady.

~*~

[boxsofrain]

Thank you!!! I am really happy that you liked it.

[brightflashes]

Bam, extremely well done. I would praise particulars, but just over all - very very well done. I love it! :D

[boxsofrain]

Thank you so much. :)