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Apr 15, 2004 18:03

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daydreamer5512 April 16 2004, 15:17:06 UTC
i like all them. You can't ask some you to rate your poems cause they are to express what you feel inside but i guess you can rate the way they express it. But they are really good. I can relate to "Again"

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br0ken__smile_ April 22 2004, 12:25:30 UTC
thanks

and yeah i understand the rating thing.

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broken6669420 April 18 2004, 08:04:50 UTC
I agree difficult to judge poetry you can't. I relate most to "Cry" except not female part your pretty good at writing you know that.

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br0ken__smile_ April 22 2004, 12:25:44 UTC
thankss (=

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hey... i_want_to_die21 May 9 2004, 07:35:35 UTC
i can't believe you did it again lol you wrote as if i was writing again...lol i can really empathize with Again, I Wish, and Not One Knows - - - which can I borrow please {with credit of course}? lol
I would relate to cry & alone and sad, too, but it seems as if i've lost my ability to cry...lol i'm serious i try so hard and i want to so badly, but i just can't..anyway i like them...they're good i'm gonna put some of mine on my journal...t2yl

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Re: hey... br0ken__smile_ May 9 2004, 17:02:03 UTC
yeah sure, borrow away:)

and yeah, i usually can't cry either, the same thing happens. but that day was horrible, and i had to like force myself to cry..

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Re: hey... i_want_to_die21 May 9 2004, 17:08:26 UTC
yeah i know what you mean...like the other day when i got released from the hospital my boyfriend was screaming at me and crying and it made me cry...that's like the first time i've cried in a year...but it felt so good to do so...

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Re: hey... br0ken__smile_ May 9 2004, 17:16:25 UTC
yeah, it does feel really good...

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myonlyrelease May 11 2004, 17:24:34 UTC
sorry-this comment is late. but i am in love with "cry".
xxox

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br0ken__smile_ May 11 2004, 17:35:23 UTC
haha its okay, i love comments, any time. lol

thanks though(:

xoxo

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