Love this, your pacing is perfect. The devastated Clark, a broken shell. Bruce so gentle. The alternate view of Bruce's first look at Clark... so sad. Not the slightly molested virgin of your other series. Love the relationship between these two. I think you need to write another epic AU version of them from this viewpoint.
Love this, your pacing is perfect. The devastated Clark, a broken shell. Bruce so gentle. The alternate view of Bruce's first look at Clark... so sad. Not the slightly molested virgin of your other series.
I'm glad you noticed that! I didn't want to break Clark too badly in my other 'verse, but this one brought home the cruelty of slavery quicker.
Love the relationship between these two. I think you need to write another epic AU version of them from this viewpoint.
Love it!
*laughs*
I think I'll stick to one epic, but there could be a sequel. I want to complete all the prompts first before I see what inspires me further. :)
This is so achingly beautiful. So many emotional facets are within this story. Fear, cruelty, despair, compassion, serenity, each and together cut and salve our hearts.
And such prose!
"...Clark would shatter again like a broken window, blood-tipped shards scattering in a rain of despair."
This story is a jewel itself.
It has such depth that I hope, someday, you write more of this universe.
This is so achingly beautiful. So many emotional facets are within this story. Fear, cruelty, despair, compassion, serenity, each and together cut and salve our hearts.
*nods*
It drew the gamut out of me.
And such prose!
"...Clark would shatter again like a broken window, blood-tipped shards scattering in a rain of despair."
This story is a jewel itself.
*beams*
I love shards-of-glass imagery. :)
It has such depth that I hope, someday, you write more of this universe.
Thank you so very much for sharing BradyGirl!
You're very welcome, Pat! I may, as this 'verse definitely has some potential. These prompts are helping me get my mojo back! :)
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Bruce and Clark = OTP :)
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Thank you. :)
Bruce and Clark = OTP :)
Absolutely! :)
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The devastated Clark, a broken shell.
Bruce so gentle.
The alternate view of Bruce's first look at Clark... so sad. Not the slightly molested virgin of your other series.
Love the relationship between these two.
I think you need to write another epic AU version of them from this viewpoint.
Love it!
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The devastated Clark, a broken shell.
Bruce so gentle.
The alternate view of Bruce's first look at Clark... so sad. Not the slightly molested virgin of your other series.
I'm glad you noticed that! I didn't want to break Clark too badly in my other 'verse, but this one brought home the cruelty of slavery quicker.
Love the relationship between these two.
I think you need to write another epic AU version of them from this viewpoint.
Love it!
*laughs*
I think I'll stick to one epic, but there could be a sequel. I want to complete all the prompts first before I see what inspires me further. :)
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Thank you! And Lionel as cruel Master is like Central Casting. ;)
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Thanks, dear! :)
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And such prose!
"...Clark would shatter again like a broken window, blood-tipped shards scattering in a rain of despair."
This story is a jewel itself.
It has such depth that I hope, someday, you write more of this universe.
Thank you so very much for sharing BradyGirl!
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*nods*
It drew the gamut out of me.
And such prose!
"...Clark would shatter again like a broken window, blood-tipped shards scattering in a rain of despair."
This story is a jewel itself.
*beams*
I love shards-of-glass imagery. :)
It has such depth that I hope, someday, you write more of this universe.
Thank you so very much for sharing BradyGirl!
You're very welcome, Pat! I may, as this 'verse definitely has some potential. These prompts are helping me get my mojo back! :)
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