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tabru April 20 2011, 15:28:11 UTC
*punches Lionel in the gut*

OH! This was so heartbreaking! Poor Clark! *huggles him* I'm glad Bruce was there to save him. I love over-protective Bats. <3

Oh! And Dick was sooooo cute! I love how there is an immediate connection between him and Clark.

I loved all the jewel-descriptions! And I caught some nice food descriptions there, too, LOL!

Wonderful job! Keep having fun with these slave-prompts! :D

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bradygirl_12 April 20 2011, 16:43:22 UTC
*punches Lionel in the gut*

Agreed! :)

I probably should have used Lionel instead of Edmund as the villain of my other slave 'verse, but he refused. :) So he's spreading his evil in other 'verses!

OH! This was so heartbreaking! Poor Clark! *huggles him* I'm glad Bruce was there to save him. I love over-protective Bats. <3

Me, too! It's one of their better traits. :)

Oh! And Dick was sooooo cute! I love how there is an immediate connection between him and Clark.

They always seem to connect, no matter what 'verse. :)

I loved all the jewel-descriptions! And I caught some nice food descriptions there, too, LOL!

*laughs*

Jewels and food! What more could a girl want? ;)

Wonderful job! Keep having fun with these slave-prompts! :D

Thanks, and I will! :)

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iccanox April 21 2011, 23:38:05 UTC
that was beautiful!!
I don't normally like slave fic but this was amazing and so full of hope for slave Clark!!! loved it thank you :)

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bradygirl_12 April 21 2011, 23:49:37 UTC
that was beautiful!!
I don't normally like slave fic but this was amazing and so full of hope for slave Clark!!! loved it thank you :)

Thank you! :)

I'm glad you read even though it wasn't your genre. I did want hope to shine through, because Clark had been through hell.

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phoenixnz April 23 2011, 03:43:10 UTC
Wow - I saw this because of Carol's banner. I felt so bad for poor Clark in the beginning, but I really love a Bruce who is so compassionate as to help Clark in this way. This story was so full of hope. I loved it.

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bradygirl_12 April 23 2011, 17:16:35 UTC
Wow - I saw this because of Carol's banner. I felt so bad for poor Clark in the beginning, but I really love a Bruce who is so compassionate as to help Clark in this way. This story was so full of hope. I loved it.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Bruce's compassion is an emotion rarely credited to him. People tend to focus on his drive and thirst for vengeance or justice. Compassion is such a big part of what he does.

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ladyblkrose May 16 2011, 03:24:32 UTC
Oh my Stars and Garters, I remember reading this and loving it to pieces but where is my comment??? NOT TO BE FOUND
I'm So Sorry]
The gentle care and loving patience Bruce showered on his broken one is so beautifully expressed here that I was amazed...and it's my favorite type of slavefic tooooooooo. A kind Master rescuing a damaged slave and making him/her whole again.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful fic, I am so satisfied, aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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bradygirl_12 May 16 2011, 16:25:25 UTC
Oh my Stars and Garters, I remember reading this and loving it to pieces but where is my comment??? NOT TO BE FOUND
I'm So Sorry]

Tsk, tsk! ;)

The gentle care and loving patience Bruce showered on his broken one is so beautifully expressed here that I was amazed...and it's my favorite type of slavefic tooooooooo. A kind Master rescuing a damaged slave and making him/her whole again.

It's a wonderful theme, isn't it? And easy to find a broken slave, sad to say.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful fic, I am so satisfied, aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

You're very welcome, m'lady! :)

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great! beizanten June 9 2015, 17:28:14 UTC
great and angsty but beautifully potray

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Re: great! bradygirl_12 June 9 2015, 23:13:06 UTC
Thank you! This was one of the most intense stories I've ever written.

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