Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 8

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Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, ot5

Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.

Disclaimer: I don’t own people. I don’t intend offense. This is fiction.

Word Count: 40,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes up

Comments

[paulina_peyton]

usually i never start a fic if it's WIP. it's just not good for my nerves you know?! but when i saw that this beauty's 40 000+ AND NC 17, i was just like "give it to me, give it to me now! i need to read it. NOW!" lol
and yeahhhhhh for that. i started reading it at 2am and no more than 3 hs later i was /unfortunately/ done. i dont know what i could write that would express what i think about this story or how much i love it. amazing, fantastic, brilliant, awesome, incredible, i could just go and on. it's perfect!! and your writing is trully amazing!!
i felt like screaming, dancing and crying all at the same time while reading this. and that part about carrots, omg i had to cover my mouth because i was afraid i would wake the whole house with my laughing. xd
i just, i love you, okay?! this story is perfect, you are perfect and i hope its never gonna end. i just also hope you gonna upload new parts fairly often because my heart might not take the wait too well. xx

[braincloud2]

Wow thank you! I am speechless with happiness, I just-adsakjdhka! Seriously I'll try to write as quickly as possible I promise, I just~ wow <3

[nostravario]

Nonono don’t complete it! Make it last forever! (And I just caught the forever young reference) Long is good, long means time to get it just right and write the kind of fic that you want to write and make everything as good as it has been this far that is what long means. I like the sound of long. Long is my new favourite and I have never ever loved a WIP more than I love the completed fics, but I do now

[nostravario]

Also, love that Harry is texting his Mum and messes with Zayn for calling his xD and that Harry straddling Zayn in the bedroom mirrors Louis straddling Niall in the bean bag room, and after the ice cream incident I'm getting the feeling young Nialler is having some thoughts, too ;p lovelovelove (and as you can see, though I said I wouldn't re-read, I couldn't help myself).

[braincloud2]

Oh my Goodness, waking up this morning to find you've left all these incredibly nice comments was just~ XD !!! I felt like it was my birthday or Christmas or something <3
Aw! Thank you, I do want to make people happy, but I really can't write it any other way except long, so it makes me very glad that you wouldn't mind it.
I think we should let Harry's logic solve more problems~ the world would be a better place from all the sexy XD
And goodness me, you pick up on all these little nuances I didn't even think were that noticeable like Louis' possessiveness, and just... my cheeks hurt from smiling too hard.
The next couple of parts are going to be so much fun to write because I've been planning it for ages~ I hope you will like it!
This fic forever loves you :D

[coffeebang]

Now we just need the proper ot5.

[braincloud2]

I know! Oh I'm so sorry it's taking so long~ I wanted it to be realistic but now I feel like I'm dragging it out, oh dear I can be such a fail-face sometimes. Thank you for reading though <3 you're very kind~

[badjujuboo]

aw LOUIS THE CARROTS YOU FOOL!!
And look at Harry forcing relationships to change and grow just by adding a few snogs here and there!

Loved it bb!

[braincloud2]

Thank you! Harry does have that effect on people :) Cheers~ xx

[alliebear93]

This is so incredible. Honestly one of my favorite stories that I've ever read. You are amazing.

[braincloud2]

Thank you, that means so much to me <3 I'm really glad you like it :)