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Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 8

Jul 11, 2012 04:01

Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, ot5

Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.

Disclaimer: I don’t own people. I don’t intend offense. This is fiction.

Word Count: 40,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes up ( Read more... )

one direction, wip, fic, ot5, harry/louis

Comments 37

always_sakura July 15 2012, 12:54:51 UTC

Seriously love this. I love how they're all in this together and their dynamic has changed. The world you've created is so realistic and the OT5 feels are so wonderfully present. I can't help but wonder what will happen if they actually win...will they be as famous as they are now? Will everything just be sped up?

Can't wait for the next update =)

braincloud2 September 3 2012, 12:35:28 UTC

Wow, that's so nice of you to say! Seriously, I think my heart is about to burst out of my chest~ Gosh, thank you mate, I'm happy you like it so much xx

doublecaramel July 17 2012, 17:35:33 UTC

Oh, this is perfection. I'm really enjoying this story so far and how slowly it's progressing. I think it's fascinating to see how the boys would've done x-factor if they had all the insight and experience they have now ( ... )

braincloud2 September 3 2012, 12:40:36 UTC

Holy moly, wow thank you! I can't believe you like it this much~ I know it's getting more complicated now, and there's so many different things to think about and how everyone would react. I just really love that you like it, and this-
'Such as Harry and Louis frolicking in the bliss of their forever makes the world a better place'
-makes me laugh so much :D Anyway, thank you, I hope you continue to read. X

indiiea July 30 2012, 12:21:05 UTC

Just want to say I completely adore this. I've always loved time-travel fics so you can imagine my happiness when finding a 1D one, especially such a well-written fic like this. :)

Love the Larry and the OT5, it makes me all fuzzy and warm on the inside. Can't wait for part 9.

braincloud2 September 3 2012, 12:42:20 UTC

Yay, thank you! That's very kind of you~ I love everything about time-travel, I can never seem to find enough of them. Gosh, you make me so happy, thank you. X

rose_emilee July 31 2012, 12:41:18 UTC

I love this, I've been looking for time travel One Direction fic's for ages and I have never been able to find one. This is amazing, update soon?

HI I LOVE YOU ext_880718 August 7 2012, 05:43:59 UTC

Oh my goodness, this fanfiction has left me with so many feelings. At first, I was hesitant about the whole idea, seeing as I internally complicate time travel fics, but this is just... It's so perfect. It seriously is so perfect. The boys actually understand the problems they have to face knowing all of the information about the future and though they've changed some aspects, they realise they have to be careful. And every character is developed well, and even Niall's accent is done well (most fanfictions are TERRIBLE at writing his accent)and everyone is just perfectly developed as characters and they interact so perfectly and UGH THEN YOU ADDED LARRY FEELS TO MY ALREADY ESTABLISHED OT5 FEELS. That was the icing on the cake of my death. Because this seriously makes me laugh and cry (in a good way) with emotions and I just get all the warm fuzzies from this and PLEASE update this soon. I mean, I don't mean to be greedy but I seriously am addicted to this perfection that you have written and I just really really need more of it, okay ( ... )