Comments | brandee_06: Title: White Horse Veronica Mars/Alex Karev GA/VM Crossover 1/2

brandee_06

Title: White Horse Veronica Mars/Alex Karev GA/VM Crossover 1/2

Dec 29, 2008 20:52

Title: White Horse 1/2 ( Read more... )

crossover, veronica mars, alex/veronica, fanfic, grey's, alex

Comments 20

poniesforall December 30 2008, 19:30:58 UTC

I really liked this. You did really well with all of the voices. I'm not as observant of GA, but it rang true to me. You always do such a fantastic job of writing the little moments and how they affect us. The phone calls with Wallace and the room scene with Veronica and Keith were spot on and so clear in my head. Great story.

brandee_06 January 1 2009, 22:27:12 UTC

Have I mentioned that your feedback always leaves me smiling? Thanks for that!! I'm glad you enjoyed this.. I have to say, Alex keeps me watching GA, because I just love him.. He deserves more airtime and decent storylines lol! But I was really nervous about writing him and doing it in a crossover! Still this has been lots of fun! Thanks so much for the awesome feedback!

serendipityxxi January 1 2009, 07:22:37 UTC

Huh. Not a crossover I'd've thought of or a pairing I thought I'd like but you're doing a fine job of convincing me with your excellent and in character Veronica, Alex and Wallace voices here! I particularly like your last three lines. :)

brandee_06 January 1 2009, 22:30:47 UTC

Heh. The pairing has been on my mind for at least a year or more! I suppose it is strange, but the voices in my head told me that Alex/Veronica would work, so I did what they asked me to :) I'm glad you found it convincing! Never writing Alex before I was kinda worried! Much like everyone from VM, I love him too much to totally screw him up! Glad you enjoyed and thanks for responding!!!

spygrrl76 January 1 2009, 15:53:05 UTC

Great story! I can really hear both Alex and Veronica's voices in this story, as well as all the other characters. This is very believable and a well-written crossover. Looking forward to the second half.

brandee_06 January 1 2009, 22:40:15 UTC

Aww thanks! I'm glad the voices work! I was nervous :o). I'm also glad you find it a believable crossover. I didn't just want to throw the two shows together..Maybe that's why it took me so long to finally get this thing together ha! Thanks soo much for responding and reading!!!

a_h_c January 1 2009, 15:53:22 UTC

I enjoyed this. One of my favorite cross-overs is one with VM and Grey's. I think I like the juxtaposition of Veronica's cynicism and the Grey's self-absorbtion, or something. This story was well-balanced, I thought, and captured the characters from both shows well. I thought your Alex voice was a good one. Thanks for the read.

brandee_06 January 1 2009, 22:54:38 UTC

Aww thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed! I love both shows, but adore Alex, and somehow he and Veronica together just kinda worked in my head.. I just had to bring her to Seattle Grace! I'm glad his voice was okay, I'm always nervous the first time I write someone! Thanks so much for reading and responding!!!

monack January 1 2009, 18:01:23 UTC

You did a great job on all of the characterizations - both on the greys side, and on the VM side. You have managed to create something that I can see as plausible.

Great job! :) looking forward to the next part.

brandee_06 January 1 2009, 22:59:55 UTC

Oh thanks so much! I'm very glad that this seems plausible! I've toyed with it for awhile trying to find a way that would make the crossover work! I've been in my safe VM only box for forever so stepping outside it and trying my hand at Grey's was a bit scary! Thanks so much for reading and the reply!!!