Merci pour ton commentaire! La suite est déjà rédigée et envoyée à ma beta! Histoire de te spoiler un peu, c'est décembre et Seth a six ans, donc c'est "THE" year où il invente Chrismukkah (j'ai bien galéré pour traduire en enfant/et en anglais l'histoire d'Hannukah, du reste. Ryan va effectivement progressé, puis va survenir un évènement, mais il va réussir à le surmonter plus facilement. Faut que je trouve une fin à cette fanfic de toute façon. Encore 5/6 chapitres. J'aimerais la boucler et en démarrer une autre, genre 5 ans après avec Trey qui se fait incarcérer en juvie (faudra que je les remette en contact du reste, mais pas tout de suite) et les csq que ça peut avoir sur Ryan et les Cohens. On verra!
Honnêtement, je ne peux vraiment pas te dire de quoi 'mon' futur Ryan aura l'air étant donné que je cherche encore une conclusion satisfaisante à cette première fanfic. En ce moment, je penche pour une série de questions de Ryan sur son adoption qui sera un prétexte à des flashbacks de la manière dont chaque Cohen a vécu l'arrivée de Ryan et sans doute la manière dont Ryan a vécu son 'arrachement' à sa famille (comment Dawn lui a promis que c'était temporaire et comment Trey est parti vivre ailleurs). Reste plus qu'à l'écrire!!
This was a wonderful update. Loved so many things about it, that I can hardly count them. One minor detail though...you choose a male shrink for Ryan. After especially moving him to a class with a female teacher because of his issues with male adults thanks to his past, that sounds like not a good idea. IMHO he would have more problems to open up and feel comfortable around a male shrink.
Thanks for commenting! You're right, I could have chosen a female shrink (I think you may have forgotten the 'fe' at the end of your comment!!), but I've decided to pick a male one for several reasons : Ryan has been staying at the Cohens for four months. He's beginning to understand that all the men don't hit, don't drink and don't abuse the children. And the Cohens didn't choose Ryan's shrink, Summer's dad told them about him and they decided to take an appointment. Plus I want Ryan and his shrink bond over soccer, and for a female shrink, it's not really easy!! And I have to admit that the only pediatrician shrink I know is a male one, so I've discussed with him and kept his first name and the fact that he was a male!
Oh, I do believe that as male shrink can work and I like your reasoning. I just think I was looking for some mentioning of the things you mentioned now in the story itself. A single comment from the shring to Ryan or the Cohens about Ryan's (former) issues with men and how he by now should have learned that not all men are like Dawn's guys and finding another male adult beside Sandy who he learns to trust might help him further.
But as I said, it's just a minor detail. One or two additional sentences I would have wished for.
There is so much goodness in this chapter and I really loved this update to pieces. So many great little moments between Ryan and all the Cohens. So don't dwell on that one little thing.
You're totally right! In the next chapter, I made Ryan meet Caleb and there's going to be an 'incident', no because Caleb is a man, but because he's having a drink. I'm going to add something during the explanation between Sandy and Caleb (note to self : take a 'post it' and write 'do not forget to add some explanations for Katwoman76'!!) I'm going to watch some of your wonderful Ben at Bravo Show's videos...minus the white godawful sneakers, he's so cute (when the girl is speaking german, on the red carpet, he's standing next to her and managed to look cool even if it should be a pretty uncomfortable situation : to have someone speaking about you in a langage you don't get!)
Aww.Good chapter.Update soon.Little!Ryan is finally part of the family. I'm glad you had Rose as Kirsten's middle name,because I'm choosing to believe that Rose was the name of Kirsten's mother and that Sophie was named after both of her grandmas.
Thanks for your comment! I'll update asap! I also think that Rose could be Kirsten's mother's name! (I highly doubt that Sophie was named after the Cohen's First Season's maid!!)
So good, as always. I haven't commented lately but just want you to know I'm enjoying the story as much as ever. I can really see Sandy and Kirsten making an effort in just this way....and little Ryan finally in a safe place, but a long way to go yet before he'll be able to fully trust in that. But he finally unpacked! Yay!
I especially loved how Sandy used the custody documents to explain, and the way you had him do it.
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J'ai adoré ce chapitre! A quand la suite? :)
(Et bonnes élections, au fait!!)
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Histoire de te spoiler un peu, c'est décembre et Seth a six ans, donc c'est "THE" year où il invente Chrismukkah (j'ai bien galéré pour traduire en enfant/et en anglais l'histoire d'Hannukah, du reste.
Ryan va effectivement progressé, puis va survenir un évènement, mais il va réussir à le surmonter plus facilement.
Faut que je trouve une fin à cette fanfic de toute façon. Encore 5/6 chapitres.
J'aimerais la boucler et en démarrer une autre, genre 5 ans après avec Trey qui se fait incarcérer en juvie (faudra que je les remette en contact du reste, mais pas tout de suite) et les csq que ça peut avoir sur Ryan et les Cohens. On verra!
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Je me demande de quoi de Ryan ci aura l'air à 11 ans. Ou à 16 ans, d'ailleurs...
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Reste plus qu'à l'écrire!!
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Loved so many things about it, that I can hardly count them.
One minor detail though...you choose a male shrink for Ryan. After especially moving him to a class with a female teacher because of his issues with male adults thanks to his past, that sounds like not a good idea. IMHO he would have more problems to open up and feel comfortable around a male shrink.
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You're right, I could have chosen a female shrink (I think you may have forgotten the 'fe' at the end of your comment!!), but I've decided to pick a male one for several reasons : Ryan has been staying at the Cohens for four months. He's beginning to understand that all the men don't hit, don't drink and don't abuse the children.
And the Cohens didn't choose Ryan's shrink, Summer's dad told them about him and they decided to take an appointment. Plus I want Ryan and his shrink bond over soccer, and for a female shrink, it's not really easy!!
And I have to admit that the only pediatrician shrink I know is a male one, so I've discussed with him and kept his first name and the fact that he was a male!
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But as I said, it's just a minor detail. One or two additional sentences I would have wished for.
There is so much goodness in this chapter and I really loved this update to pieces. So many great little moments between Ryan and all the Cohens.
So don't dwell on that one little thing.
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In the next chapter, I made Ryan meet Caleb and there's going to be an 'incident', no because Caleb is a man, but because he's having a drink. I'm going to add something during the explanation between Sandy and Caleb (note to self : take a 'post it' and write 'do not forget to add some explanations for Katwoman76'!!)
I'm going to watch some of your wonderful Ben at Bravo Show's videos...minus the white godawful sneakers, he's so cute (when the girl is speaking german, on the red carpet, he's standing next to her and managed to look cool even if it should be a pretty uncomfortable situation : to have someone speaking about you in a langage you don't get!)
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I'm glad you had Rose as Kirsten's middle name,because I'm choosing to believe that Rose was the name of Kirsten's mother and that Sophie was named after both of her grandmas.
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I especially loved how Sandy used the custody documents to explain, and the way you had him do it.
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