Wasted (Part 3)

Mar 08, 2008 13:19

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wasted, cheekymice's challenge

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jassylou March 8 2008, 15:51:54 UTC
This is awesome! Poor Woobie he can't seem to get anything right.It's a case of "You can't please all of the people all of the time". Seth is always up his own Ass its no wonder that he didn't notice Ryan going down hill. I would love for Ryan to regain his health enough to be able to compete. I want to see him kick some ass and win!!!.........

It's about time the Cohens had a wake up call.("Cohens wake up and smell the roses!!!!".

I'm loving where this is going brassebouillon but don't let Ryan loose too much weight please?. I like little "chunky,healthy,happy Ryan the best.

You're doing a great job of writing about such a sensitive subject. Mwah!

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brassebouillon March 8 2008, 16:12:38 UTC
Thanks for your comment!
Ryan's gonna of course get better! It's gonna be hard for him but now, the Cohens know and are gonna help him!

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moonspell4 March 8 2008, 16:28:39 UTC
Well I've been reading this as you posted, but this is the first time I'm replying.

Nice work on the entire thing, its good to see Ryan so driven to accomplish something, despite being bad. Is outburst in the end was great. So now I'm wondering how Sandy and Kirsten will deal with it. Like you've been saying its bound to be a bumpy recovery by him and I'm wondering how it will affect everyone around him.

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brassebouillon March 8 2008, 17:15:57 UTC
Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you like it!

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mirella67 March 8 2008, 19:54:06 UTC
Mark Green? Are you an ER fan, or is the name pure coincidence? Anyway, glad the Cohens are finally paying attention!

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brassebouillon March 8 2008, 19:59:14 UTC
I was an ER fan! I haven't watched the show since a long time! And the name I gave to the doctor in a brand new life is also Mark Green, he's the same character in the two fanfics!
Thanks for commenting!

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60schic March 8 2008, 21:46:13 UTC
Well thank God it's out in the open now. I'm glad you had Ryan collapse so that there's no question he needs to be hospitalized. And good on him for calling Sandy and Kirsten on their neglect of him. Now you only need to wipe Seth's stupid little face in the reality of the situation.

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brassebouillon March 9 2008, 11:21:22 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I guess the Cohen really needed something to happen to realize that there was something wrong with their foster son.
Seth is going to be present in the next part! Summer too!

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fifimom March 9 2008, 11:09:22 UTC
You just broke my heart and I loved every minute (word) of it. Ryan's confrontation with the Cohen is amazing. Thanks.

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brassebouillon March 9 2008, 11:19:21 UTC
You're more than welcome! Thanks for your nice comment!

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