This is great! It's interesting to see him finally have the strength to speak honestly with the Cohens, when physically he is in decline. Can't wait for the next installment!
AU or not--and yes, I guess an anorexic Ryan is AU--you've done a really good job with this. It's totally realistic that the disease would have developed the way you have it here, with Ryan looking for a way to stay on the team and make the Cohens proud. But oh, I could just shake Sandy and Kirsten and Seth! Now that they know what's going on, they'd better make Ryan's welfare their priority!
Ryan really is messed up but hopefully he's now going to get the help that he needs. I hope that Sandy and Kirsten feel bad about letting things get to this point and hopefully Seth will feel bad about his neglect of his friend/brother well. I hope that you can fix this.
Looooved it. *drops dead* please post a new chap soon. I can't wait for more.
"And now, you need to free the poolhouse because your sister is coming and you want to lock me up because I’m too stupid to go to college right now!” sobbed Ryan." - This just broke my heart.
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I hope that Sandy and Kirsten feel bad about letting things get to this point and hopefully Seth will feel bad about his neglect of his friend/brother well.
I hope that you can fix this.
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In the next part, you'll read how Seth feels about Ryan's state!
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Thanks for reading!
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please post a new chap soon. I can't wait for more.
"And now, you need to free the poolhouse because your sister is coming and you want to lock me up because I’m too stupid to go to college right now!” sobbed Ryan."
- This just broke my heart.
keep up the good work, love SB
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