I need a life and to get rid of this flu. I am pathetic. I am checking your website every hour. Since u posted the laster chapter early last Saturday, I have high hopes for today. Pls put me out of my misery.
Poor, poor Ryan. You've really got a good handle on how Ryan would be thinking under these circumstances. I'm very happy to see that you've arleady got the next chapter posted.
Don't worry for A Brand new life, I'm posting Wasted so it's not urgent! All LJ's readers need an update of Twist of Fate (* puppy eyes * and pressure!!) so yeah!
Ow. Poor Ryan, he just keeps pushing himself and all these flaws he sees in himself are phantoms. I loved this: "Sandy felt his heart break when he spotted tears welling in his foster son’s eyes. Ryan didn’t look like the sarcastic teenager he had met in juvie six months before. He looked like a little kid who had scratched his knee on the playground and was afraid of the rubbing alcohol. -“Ryan, kid, I think you’ve got a bad cramp. It’s painful, but you’re gonna be okay. Let me help you.” Sandy keeled down in front of Ryan and began to massage the cramped thigh. -“Just concentrate on breathing properly, kid. I promise it’s gonna be better in a few minutes. As Sandy went on massaging his leg, Ryan’s breathing calmed down."
And when Ryan just leaned trustingly against him and fell asleep, I cried.
Good stuff! I hate that you're torturing the woobie, but you're just doing it so WELL.
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All LJ's readers need an update of Twist of Fate (* puppy eyes * and pressure!!) so yeah!
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-“Ryan, kid, I think you’ve got a bad cramp. It’s painful, but you’re gonna be okay. Let me help you.” Sandy keeled down in front of Ryan and began to massage the cramped thigh.
-“Just concentrate on breathing properly, kid. I promise it’s gonna be better in a few minutes.
As Sandy went on massaging his leg, Ryan’s breathing calmed down."
And when Ryan just leaned trustingly against him and fell asleep, I cried.
Good stuff! I hate that you're torturing the woobie, but you're just doing it so WELL.
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