Wasted (Part 9)

Apr 27, 2008 15:57


Summary : For Cheekymice's funfic challenge. My prompt was "anorexia". This fanfic set in early first season, just after Thanksgiving and is AU.

Beta : I want to thank Helen C for betaing this fanfic and giving me great advices!
Disclaimers : The characters and the universe were created and are still owned by Josh Schwartz. (*glare*)
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wasted, cheekymice's challenge

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katwoman76 April 27 2008, 15:08:43 UTC
I only have one complaint - too short. I want more. Pretty please? *pleading eyes*
You sure put a whole new level of evil to Ryan's past with the revelations of this chapter.
Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:02:54 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I'm writing more but I'm in a lazy phase, I'm afraid (sometimes, I'm scared this 'lazy phase' turns into a way of life!)

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indigorayne April 27 2008, 15:15:44 UTC
I am so happy that you posted another chapter! It is only going to get worse for Ryan before it can get better, isn't it? I need to make a 'poor woobie" icon.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:04:11 UTC
Thanks for your comment! BTW, I LOVE your icon! I swear Ryan is gonna be better but it's not realistic to think that he's gonna be better as fast as in canon!

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60schic April 27 2008, 16:54:20 UTC
Oooo - very intense chapter. Poor Ryan doesn't understand that he has to be broken down to be put back together.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:05:06 UTC
Thanks for commenting! He certainly doesn't understand but the Cohens are gonna make him get it!

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chrisear April 27 2008, 17:37:35 UTC
great...update...yipee....

great cliffhanger.... cant wait to see what Ryan does or how long he ll stay away....

are you ahead with your chapters again and content?

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:05:52 UTC
Thanks for commenting! Unfortunately, I'm not ahead at all but I've a precise idea of what I'm gonna write in the next chapter!

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snapsparagus April 27 2008, 17:38:08 UTC
Love it! Looking forward to the next chapter.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:07:23 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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