Wasted (Part 9)

Apr 27, 2008 15:57


Summary : For Cheekymice's funfic challenge. My prompt was "anorexia". This fanfic set in early first season, just after Thanksgiving and is AU.

Beta : I want to thank Helen C for betaing this fanfic and giving me great advices!
Disclaimers : The characters and the universe were created and are still owned by Josh Schwartz. (*glare*)
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wasted, cheekymice's challenge

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scrapperbilly April 27 2008, 17:58:30 UTC
Oh! The hurt never stops.(it's all in a good way)
Poor Ryan *hugs ryan*
Great update *nods vigorously* yes, yes.
looking forward to see what happens next. =)
Hugs SB

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:08:02 UTC
Thanks for commenting! Well, it will stop eventually, but yet, a talking is in order!

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alluxera April 27 2008, 19:18:27 UTC
I like it very much, very heartbreaking. Poor Ryan, he is going through so much pain.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:08:28 UTC
Thanks for your comment! Ryan will get better eventually, I promise!

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chazper April 28 2008, 01:12:48 UTC
Such a painful chapter! (And yes, that's a compliment.) Ryan takes these little baby steps towards recovery but he doesn't realize he's making progress since he expects and hopes to leave his past behind, and he can't. He's got to face it, but it's so hard, and you've done a great job showing that.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:15:43 UTC
Thanks for your comment! In canon, I've always dislike the way Ryan's past was unexistent and that nobody really wanted to talk about it like he never had one!

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ryanforever April 28 2008, 06:34:58 UTC
So sad and yet so hopeful too. Ryan hasn't yet realised that to get better he needs to confront all of these demons. But he's finally getting the help that he needed. Let's hope it has the desired effect.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:23:27 UTC
Thanks for commenting! It *will* have the desired effect, I promised!

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caligirl59 April 28 2008, 06:35:55 UTC
Its going to get worse before it gets better for the Cohens plus 1,but I hope Ryan is strong enough to see it through to the end.Wonderful chapter,thanks for the update.

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brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:24:25 UTC
Thanks for your comment! It has to get worse before it gets better : Ryan's past has to be talked about in order he gets better!

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