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brassebouillon

Wasted (Part 9)

Apr 27, 2008 15:57

Summary : For Cheekymice's funfic challenge. My prompt was "anorexia". This fanfic set in early first season, just after Thanksgiving and is AU.

Beta : I want to thank Helen C for betaing this fanfic and giving me great advices!
Disclaimers : The characters and the universe were created and are still owned by Josh Schwartz. (*glare*)
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wasted, cheekymice's challenge

Comments 31

mirella67 April 28 2008, 13:58:09 UTC

Really good chapter. I like how you tie Ryan's past experiences to his need for perfection.

brassebouillon April 28 2008, 14:29:32 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

malinr April 28 2008, 18:22:32 UTC

Ryan is going through HELL on earth in your story right now. Like you I was not satisfied with the way they handled it in canon. You are doing a great job of it. Thanks for the update. Hugs

brassebouillon April 30 2008, 16:36:22 UTC

Thanks for commenting! With such a disease and Ryan's self doubts, I couldn't wrap the story in a couple of chapters, so...

anne35 April 29 2008, 02:15:36 UTC

Poor Ryan. You're still painting a very sad picture here. I do love that you Write Dawn without redemption. I always prefer to believe that she was a bad mother. I never bought that whole taking Ryan to zoo when he was eight story.

brassebouillon April 30 2008, 16:38:17 UTC

Thanks for your comment! Dawn and Frank are and will always be bad parents IMO! The worst thing ever was Great and Nice!Frank in season 4. I hated it more than the johnny arc! Totally unrealistic!
(update of Twist of Fate?...*puppy eyes*...)

smc36 April 29 2008, 23:26:42 UTC

so sad.
soo poor sad Ryan.
*sob*

brassebouillon April 30 2008, 16:39:18 UTC

Thanks for your comment! Ryan's gonna be better, I promise...*give a handkerchief*

jassylou May 1 2008, 11:45:24 UTC

Tears falling here! A very sad update that makes one realise how his real mother (Debateable)could allow her child to be abused,demeaned and totally traumatised in this way ( ... )

brassebouillon May 5 2008, 07:28:56 UTC

Thanks for your nice comment! I also think that the Cohens can't (and they won't!) let the psychiatrist let all the work. But they've chosen to let him talk about it with Ryan first. They are not equiped to deal with the first step, but they're gonna be there for him soon!
I'll update tonight!

jassylou May 5 2008, 07:40:02 UTC

You deserve to be praised for this wonderful story :)