Wasted (Part 10)

May 05, 2008 17:43


Summary : for Cheekymice's funfic challenge. My prompt was "anorexia". This fanfic set in early first season, just after Thanksgiving and is AU.

Beta : Thanks to the incredible Helen C for betaing this fanfic!
Disclaimers : The characters and the universe were created and are still owned by Josh Schwartz. (*glare*)
All mistakes are my personal ( Read more... )

wasted, cheekymice's challenge

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mirella67 May 5 2008, 16:31:26 UTC
Well, this is tough subject matter, but you handle it well. Good work.

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brassebouillon May 6 2008, 07:31:14 UTC
Thanks for your comment! I was a little afraid it would be awkward but this scene had to be written!

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smc36 May 5 2008, 17:33:06 UTC
Oh how difficult a situation.
I like Rick.

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brassebouillon May 6 2008, 07:32:33 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I like Rick too and I was wondering if he could appear in the next chapters...

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caligirl59 May 5 2008, 18:37:33 UTC
Oh if only Dawn had dated a few more like Rick.That was hard to read it was so moving and sad.Thanks for the update.

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brassebouillon May 6 2008, 07:33:15 UTC
Thanks for commenting! Well, according to canon!, there's only one Dawn's old boyfriend Ryan wants to meet again, so...

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chrisear May 5 2008, 19:02:52 UTC
an update.... yeah thx.. happy me

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brassebouillon May 6 2008, 07:33:35 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I hope you liked it!

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chrisear May 6 2008, 08:13:42 UTC
sure I did. While waiting for this update, I was looking forward to Ryan being gone several days and relapsing. But this was well done as well. From the medical point of view.. what happend to him to spent a week in a hospital?

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brassebouillon May 6 2008, 08:51:13 UTC
"what happend to him to spent a week in a hospital?"

The first time when he passed out in front of Kirsten, Sandy and Dr Green or the second time for his kidney infection?

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katwoman76 May 5 2008, 19:31:23 UTC
This was a very emotional and wonderful chapter.
Loved the way Sandy handled the situation and the trip to the museum was a great idea.

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brassebouillon May 6 2008, 07:44:35 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I wasn't very confident about the scene between Sandy and Ryan.

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