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Twilight Fic: Home (A Change of Heart, Part 9) - COMPLETE

Jan 18, 2011 14:49

Title: Home (Part 9 of A Change of Heart) - COMPLETE
Author: bratanimus
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter, R for some others
Spoilers: This story, begun post-Eclipse, is my version of Breaking Dawn. First person Edward POV.
Warnings: Mild sexual innuendo
Pairings: Edward/Bella, all other canon pairings
Word Count: 3,965
Summary: Jacob had backtracked down ( Read more... )

edward/bella, twilight, change of heart, fic

Comments 22

_puchula_ January 18 2011, 21:59:44 UTC

I always said you should have written Twilight instead of SMeyer. Thanks for finishing the story! I've loved every update and it's a far better ending than Breaking Dawn. In my book, you are canon. ;)

bratanimus January 19 2011, 01:29:40 UTC

Thank you, hon. *blush* :D Sorry it took me sooooooo long to finish it, but I'm very glad you liked it. Thanks for your sweet words; you're too kind. :)

_puchula_ January 19 2011, 01:55:14 UTC

Not one bit, you've earned them. ;) And I'd love to read any others stories (Twilight or non Twilight) if you have them.

bratanimus January 19 2011, 06:49:43 UTC

Thank you again. :)

I do have other fics, which you can find under my "fic" tag here on LJ (I seriously need to update my tags, lol), or under the same username over at fanfiction.net, whichever is easiest. I started off writing Harry Potter and then got into Twilight, so most of my stuff is in those two fandoms.

Cheers!

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scarlett71177 January 18 2011, 22:50:24 UTC

Oh, lovely. Just lovely-lovely.

This was such an awesomely-beautiful journey. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

This will ALWAYS be one of my favorites. I just rec'd this at FFS the other day because it's SO rich and wonderful.

Thank you, thank you!

bratanimus January 19 2011, 01:31:36 UTC

Mmm, your icon is lovely-lovely. Isn't that photo fabulous??? Can't wait for the film!!

Thank you for your thoughtful comments, and thanks for sticking with this story even though it took me ages to finish it. And thank you, too, for the rec over at FFS; I'll have to go swing by and thank you properly there, as well. :D

I'm very pleased you liked this. *hugs*

scarlett71177 January 19 2011, 05:53:49 UTC

YES, that photo is such major win. *swoon* I can't wait either!

Honestly, it has been a wonderful fic to read, and I was thrilled to read every chapter.

*hugs* Hoping all is well.

bratanimus January 19 2011, 06:51:37 UTC

Thanks again. ♥

Things are good. I'm hoping to do a proper post to catch everyone up on certain news very soon. :D

How are you?

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train_lindz January 18 2011, 23:19:29 UTC

I can't decide I'm glad that this ended so well because I'm so sorry its over...

I NEED TO REREAD IT NOW.

This is my Breaking Dawn - love it, and you.

Job well done, Lauren. Bravo and all that jazz :)

♥

bratanimus January 19 2011, 01:33:22 UTC

Aw, thanks, hon. ♥ I'm sorry it's over, too, but very glad I finally finished it after all the time it took, lol. Thank you for your very kind words. You're awesome and I love you, too! :D

anonymous January 19 2011, 02:34:58 UTC

Wow! I just pop in from time to time to check. . . and here it was tonight!
Thanks so much for Change of Heart. I enjoyed it so much. And I think now, my Twilight fan fiction following has come to and end. Thanks for bringing a nice closure.

bratanimus January 19 2011, 06:53:55 UTC

Thank YOU for following this story and sticking with it, even through all the vast stretches of time between updates, lol. I'm so glad you liked this story and enjoyed a good closure. Thanks for your lovely comments. :)

javidan January 19 2011, 03:32:53 UTC

I'll be back for a proper review...

I've been re-reading Breaking Dawn and being a bit melancholy on the direction she took the series BUT NOW I have this to console myself with.

I've just copied all of your chapters to my Kindle and will begin a re-read!

bratanimus January 19 2011, 06:55:30 UTC

I hear ya about being melancholy about the direction SMeyer took the last book. Argh. Thanks for your kind words about the direction I took. ;) I hope all is well! ♥

javidan January 21 2011, 00:13:25 UTC

Very intense, much more details about the cullens.I realy prefere your version. S.M. version is coulered by her mormonion believe...
Too much of a fairy tale.
I love it!

bratanimus January 24 2011, 15:16:06 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so pleased you liked my version of Breaking Dawn. I agree, SMeyer's last book really veered off into strange territory, which I can only imagine was because her own personal beliefs (family, religion, whichever) got in the way of the story. It seemed like a different series all of a sudden. Anyhow, I'm glad that this story is a nice alternative for you! Thanks for your kind words about the details on the Cullens, too. :)