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Fic: Priorities

Feb 04, 2011 09:39

Title: Priorities
Author: brate7
Fandom: Sherlock BBC
Rating: PG
Word Count: 725
Summary: The chase isn't always merry.
Note: Originally posted at thegameison_sh for the prompt "new."

( The only thing he could focus on was not letting Sherlock get so far ahead that he lost track of him. )

sherlock, fic

Comments 20

spike21 February 4 2011, 17:51:54 UTC

oh very nice!
good voices, in character and just lovely vibe between them. Oh *john*...

brate7 February 6 2011, 17:52:17 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad to hear they sounded true to character. It was my first attempt in this fandom and I was very nervous.

And there can never be enough awesomely hurt John.

eldritchhobbit February 4 2011, 18:43:44 UTC

This is lovely. Great characterization.

brate7 February 6 2011, 17:59:02 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm so happy they sounded true to you.

ginbitch February 4 2011, 18:57:06 UTC

I loved this in the competition and I'm delighted that you've now posted it!

The dialogue is spot-on and I love Sherlock committing John's scars to memory. Lovely!

brate7 February 6 2011, 18:43:23 UTC

Yes, I was feeling brave. :) I'm so happy to hear the dialogue worked for you. And I love to think of Sherlock showing his caring in unusual ways.

(Now I just have to work on my story for the next challenge. Sigh.)

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brate7 February 6 2011, 18:45:18 UTC

Exactly! But what if Sherlock's good habits and John's bad habits rub off? Hmm. That could be interesting.

Thank you for reading!

darthhellokitty February 5 2011, 00:39:02 UTC

This is really charming.

brate7 February 6 2011, 18:45:50 UTC

Thank you!