education of the heart (pg-13, chloe/oliver)

Sep 04, 2010 01:21

title: education of the heart
pairing: chloe/oliver
rating: pg-13
summary: the wonderful complexities of the human heart, a chloe/oliver non-linear love story
notes: title taken from an aristotle quote, entry will be locked in a week's time

The human heart weighs less than a pound. It beats approximately seventy times a minute and over a hundred-thousand times in a day. Aristotle believed that the heart was directly linked to our thoughts and emotions. )

character: oliver queen, fan fiction, pairing: chloe/oliver, fandom: smallville, character: chloe sullivan

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slytherinpunk September 4 2010, 18:14:52 UTC
This is breathtaking. I love how you've woven these intimate and simple stories of their lives shared together with the anatomy to accompany the emotions, and then perfectly ended it with the moment where they began. Genius.

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brin_bailey September 5 2010, 22:39:57 UTC
Thanks!

I was really hoping that the anatomy snippets would match up well with the story snippets. :)

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brin_bailey September 5 2010, 22:40:10 UTC
Thanks for reading! :D

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sxymami0909 September 4 2010, 19:45:48 UTC
You've left me practically speachless with this one. It's really written wonderfully. I love the style and the small glimpses we get into their lives. Just Beautiful.:-)

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brin_bailey September 5 2010, 22:40:29 UTC
Thank you!

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pennytrees September 5 2010, 02:23:12 UTC
Simply beautiful. The non-proposal was sweet and my most favorite part, I could see Ollie throwing in the little factoid with that disarming charm.

A little nugget of gold, this one.

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brin_bailey September 5 2010, 22:41:48 UTC
Thanks!

Yeah, I think Ollie would just randomly be all, "So, I have this ring, and I don't want to ask you, because I don't want you to say 'no', so here, have a random fact about ancient Romans and we'll call it a day!"

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purple_moon123 September 6 2010, 04:46:01 UTC
OMG!!!! This is just so beautiful!!! Each moment just added to the next!!!

Wow!!! Just WOW!!!!!!!!!!!

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brin_bailey September 6 2010, 21:10:01 UTC
Aww, thank you! :)

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