Fic: Forever

[brion]

Title: Forever
Rating: G
Genre: General; very, very vague yaoi
Characters: Kakashi, Minato
Beta: hammond
Summary: Kakashi does not want Minato to leave him.

Comments

[anat_astarte]

Oh wow, this is really great! Fantastic portrayal of their final moments together and desperation :D

Thank You Very Much!!!

[brion]

Oh my goodness, really?!?! Thank you so much! This is my first fanfic ever and I really tried to do my best. I just chose my favorite characters and put myself in their shoes to try to understand how they might have felt during their final moments together.

Re: Thank You Very Much!!!

[anat_astarte]

Yup, really :D Great job with this :D

[superduperotaku]

I like this. I've never read anything about these two interacting.

P.S. I'm claiming this last line for my entry

Thank You Very Much!!!

[brion]

Thank you for reading it and I'm glad you like it! I can't wait to read what you write.

Excellent

[mggrubb85]

This was great. Thanks for posting it.

Re: Excellent

[brion]

Thank you for reading it! I am so glad you liked it. This is my first fanfic.

Re: Excellent

[mggrubb85]

Really? Thats cool that we've both read each other's first fics.

Re: Excellent

[brion]

That is cool. Do you plan on writing fics with a pairing other than SasuNaru?

[mochalatt3]

very good, I love reading about the fourth :)

[brion]

Thank you so much!

[micah_n10]

This was really good. The part about Kakashi using Minato's name being the first and last time he would hear it was wonderfully sad. Nicely done!

[brion]

Thank you!!! I read a great fic where Kakashi only said Minato's name twice (or thrice) and I wanted to incorporate that into my story.