Fic: Like Luggage of Some Departed Traveller; Six

[britomart_is]

Master Post

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Comments

[callistosh65]

Phenomenal. This is story-telling of the very best kind.

[britomart_is]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it & I really appreciate hearing your thoughts. :)

[rivkat]

Fantastic! I was gripped by the story all the way through, and I really enjoyed the way the developing relationships played out and how Sam and Dean made their way back together, with Jess.

[britomart_is]

Thank you very much! Obviously the relationships (and imperiling them, and fixing them) were a big focus for me so it's lovely to hear that.

[big_heart_june]

Oh my god, I LOVE this something fierce! your way of storytelling is so ridiculously beautiful, I can't even...MY HEART. you made me LOVE Sam/Dean/Jess, omg, I nearly cried at your ending..oh man, I was so scared Jess was gonna die..You write a glorious Dean, btw, I love him to death.

"You guys together?" He nods to Jess's arm, linked with Sam's.

Sam hooks an arm around Dean's shoulders, smiles to encompass the three of them. "Yeah, we are." SO MUCH LOVE

[britomart_is]

Thank you so much! What a lovely generous comment - it's incredibly fun to get to hear all your reactions, and I appreciate your taking the time to write it all out! Glad Dean worked for you - for whatever reason, even though my heart will always belong to Sam, I tend to write Dean POV.

[crimson_adder]

this is. excellent. I think I might have cried, and I forgot to watch Doctor Who in between reading, just let it run on mute, 'cause this was so absorbing. :D

looooove.

[britomart_is]

WHO! I love finding other Who fans. Thank you very much, and I'm delighted that you got that into it. Hope you've gotten a chance to catch up w/ Doc Who by now. :D

[earthquakedream]

You had me glued to the screen through the whole fic. It's like the most epic love story told in the harshest setting. You did wonders with Jess's character and the boys were so damn flawed and written so well. It's going to take awhile for me to get over this one. Thank you so much for sharing this. ♥

[britomart_is]

Thank you! Glad the characterization worked for you, and that it did in fact read as an epic love story (my intention) rather than a slog through misery & suffering (a danger, I think.) Lovely to hear your thoughts on it.