Comments | brittlemadness4: "So make my bed the grave and shovel dirt onto my sheets"

brittlemadness4

"So make my bed the grave and shovel dirt onto my sheets"

Feb 07, 2005 19:54

yeahhhhh... so read. comment if you wish. constructive criticism is helpful. but nothing mean/harsh please! i'm sensitive/protective about my writing, and i work to build it stronger, but it doesn't help if people bash it. thank you.

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perfectreason February 7 2005, 19:30:14 UTC

I liked them.

Question is everything supposed to be in poem form. I never really liked it. Thats why I just write everthing out in a paragraph form.

brittlemadness4 February 9 2005, 19:05:03 UTC

yeah, i usually do stuff in poem form.... it just kind of ends up that way, and i love messing around with spacing and fonts and stuff when its in poem form, so i usually go with that... but once in a while i venture into the paragraph form

booksandteabags February 10 2005, 10:27:17 UTC

I honestly was hoping for a short story or something, and ordinarily I think the poetry most people write (mine included) is terrible.

But I was really surprised and liked what I read (I bounced around to the shorter ones, as I am have class soon).

I hope you keep writing, but would really like to see some prose (a present and hopeless endeavor of mine).