AU Fic: Domina Cariño (9/?)

[brontok]

Domina Cariño (9/?)
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 853
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
Warning: Some parts (not all) may contain minor yet integral BDSM scenes/themes.

Comments

[narusaku4vr]

Sergio, on your next meeting will you let Nando take control or will it be the other way around?

This is getting better and better. I'm looking forward for the next chapters.

[brontok]

We'll see.. ;-)
And I'm glad this is something you look forward to.. gives me more incentive to write! :-D

[hahahahagas]

If he doesnt see the bruise he's so gonna recognise the taste. Right??? oh my god I'm so excited its getting ridiculous :-D

Your becoming my fic Dom hahahahahahaha

[brontok]

Hohoho, don't tell me that! I'm a nice gray-area, middle-of-the-road pacifist (I think), I'm not fit to be a Dom of any kind! :-D
And oh, I see you have laser vision. I do admit I out some clues in the last paragraph, and you picked up on that!

[clemmajane]

So happy to see this fic updated this morning! Thank you so much for the story. The anticipation is killing me!

[brontok]

Oh thank you too for reading and commenting! Your comments are love! :-)

[baronessbadger]

YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE! I totally didn't keep your journal open in a tab all weekend and reload it an embarrassing number of times. Certainly not.

Muahahahaha. If Sergio hasn't already figured out that Niño is Fernando (I'm still not entirely sure he hasn't...) I think he may once he sees that bruise. Or the freckles. Or gives him a lick...

(I wonder if Niño's going to give him a bruise to match? Maybe something for him to hide when Fernando shows up again?)

I really love the beginning of this-the description of Sergio and insight into what he's feeling and thinking. The bit about how other failed relationships is especially telling. He's just never had what he needs to be secure in a relationship...
and the fact that he still feels that Fernando is holding all the power (even when it seems like he's the one submitting).

Gah. It's just all so perfect. <3

[brontok]

THANK YOU!!! <3
*psst, I tend to update anytime between Sunday late morning and Sunday early afternoon (EST)* no need for you to waste a perfectly good Saturday! :-D

[baronessbadger]

Oh, it definitely wasn't wasted, I'm getting a lot of writing done, myself. ;)

I can't wait for more!

[brontok]

Ooooohhh, you're writing! *excited*
Erm, also, I have a question. Or two. :-)))

[dld_ftw]

I'm barely awake and I've already read this twice. Oh Sergio, you're such a mess. Telling people upcoming scenes is unforgiveable, btw. ;-) I do love that it was wanting Fernando that drove him out of his comfort zone again and also that he's thinking about freckles and drunk when he calls Lady O. Nino reminds him of Fer although it was the other way around in the beginning. It's like that line in Pulp's Babies "I know you won't believe it's true/I only went with her 'cuz she looks like you!" Poor boo thinks Fer is never coming back again and he drove another one away, doesn't he? These two are gloriously messed up. I love it. Sergio's right about one thing - Fer can control him by denying him which is exactly what he's doing right now, although I don't think it's intentional because Fer doesn't know which way is up right now. But by not being there when sergio wants/expects him to be, fer has upset sergio's applecart and sergio is bucking his routine. He's out drinking, calling doms, etc. By the same token, sese has changed fer's

[dld_ftw]

I also love how Fer ate the pickles and onions from his sandwich. Nice touch. They fill in all of each other's areas don't they? ;-) also, fer doing that was definitely making a point.

[brontok]

Twisty bliss! Ha, I love that phrase! Although it does involve some level of mindfuck on my part when trying to plot things out.. *_*