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Domina Cariño (11/?)

Aug 29, 2011 00:54

Domina Cariño (11/?)
Type: AU
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 829
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
A/N: Sorry this took so long! Real life took over, but now I'm back! :D Here be Sergio's POV for the scene we left off in Part 10. ( Read more... )

fernando torres, domina cariño, sernando, sergio ramos, au, fic

Comments 26

hahahahagas August 28 2011, 17:18:30 UTC

Good to see ya back... I missed ya :-D

Loved seeing this from Sergio's point of view.

Soooooooooooooooooo excited for next chapter

brontok August 28 2011, 17:39:48 UTC

missed you too! :D missed the comm, missed LJ, missed football and slash fics! gaah, feeling a bit rusty still, w/c is why I had to cut this part into 2.. but I'm working on it!
thanks for being the first to comment yet again! :-)))))

notoriousjk August 28 2011, 17:58:10 UTC

this was....well as amazing as always.

damn I thought for sure Sergio knew going in, but I guess not. At least the cat's out of the bag now. Can't wait for the 2nd part, this should be interesting. Love the visceral feeling of this chapter-the feel, the scent, the actions of sex all laid bare-this wasn't "making love", this was "fucking", and it was glorious & dirty & real.

brontok September 5 2011, 00:11:47 UTC

heh, thanks! :-D wanted Sergio to know too but thought he and Fer might need to have a more angsty confrontation, hahahaha
thanks, I always love reading your thoughts on the scenes!

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brontok September 5 2011, 00:22:01 UTC

thanks, you had me worried too :-)))))))) I promise to try my damnedest best to be a better dealer/pusher/supplier for you!

sukha4 August 28 2011, 18:09:01 UTC

Welcome back!

This is so great. Loved Sergio's POV. And all that description about Nando's skin and freckles. hmm HOT ; )

Looking forward to the next part!

brontok September 5 2011, 00:30:50 UTC

yep, endless words to wax poetic about Nando's skin and freckles, someone should write an ode!
thanks as always!

narusaku4vr August 28 2011, 19:00:02 UTC

Yaay! You're back!

I've missed this a lot.

Sergio knowing Nando from memory makes me go awwww.

EXCITED FOR THE NEXT PART!

brontok September 5 2011, 00:39:00 UTC

Missed writing this too, wouldn't you believe? happy to see you back reading and commenting too!