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Domina Cariño (11/?)

Aug 29, 2011 00:54

Domina Cariño (11/?)
Type: AU
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 829
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
A/N: Sorry this took so long! Real life took over, but now I'm back! :D Here be Sergio's POV for the scene we left off in Part 10. ( Read more... )

fernando torres, domina cariño, sernando, sergio ramos, au, fic

Comments 26

falafhel August 28 2011, 19:05:03 UTC

HAVEN'T READ IT YET (watching the real madrid match) BUT WILL LATER! BUT OMG, I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SOOOOO LONG! YOU SHOULD HAVE SEEN MY BLODDY FACE. I WAS MAKING STRANGE SOUNDS AND WAVING MY HANDS... MY MUM LOOKED AT ME STRANGELY TO SAY THE LEAST...

vitaminbjorner August 28 2011, 20:06:33 UTC

okay, i'm more calm now. i liked how you did this chapter in relation to the last one. You better not leave us hanging for too long this time, yeah?

PS. super glad to have you back again, can't wait to read the next chapter! I promise i'll write a better comment then! :D

brontok September 5 2011, 00:58:57 UTC

heh, I promise to try not to or at least give sufficient warning if I'm falling off the grid! :-D I'll try to finish this series though, first! haha

brontok September 5 2011, 00:54:39 UTC

heh, what I'd give to see that scene with your mum! :-)

dld_ftw August 28 2011, 19:05:21 UTC

Every time I think I know where you're going to go with this, you throw me another curve ball. I LOVE IT!

I can't wait to see the second part. So glad to see you back. Fantastic chapter again.

brontok September 5 2011, 01:13:33 UTC

thanks! :-D i'm glad i'm not being too predictable! haha, but you know I only learn what comes next after already writing it, makes the words flow more freely..
always glad to see you here, btw!

clemmajane August 28 2011, 19:42:19 UTC

You are killing me! I have been checking all along for the next chapter....and it is awesome! Thank You!!!!!!!!!

brontok September 5 2011, 02:15:29 UTC

oh, so sorry! I figured earlier on I should have posted someting about disappearing for a while but I could only post my rant, haha
hope this chapter and the next ones make up for it, thanks as always!

difusion August 29 2011, 02:15:26 UTC

ohmygoditissogoodtohaveyoubackiamaliveagain.

20309455865030330;ld;f;!

brontok September 5 2011, 02:16:49 UTC

oh, you've moved on to numbers! gotta update by comment-reading skillz :-D

albion_lass August 29 2011, 04:36:47 UTC

yaaaaaaaaay you're back!

omgggggg i can't wait to read what happens next, will serhio hate him forever for being a dom i hope not

brontok September 5 2011, 02:17:37 UTC

yaaay, glad to be back too!
haha, next part's up and it's um... angsty (huh)