Domina Cariño (11/?)

[brontok]

Domina Cariño (11/?)
Type: AU
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 829
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
A/N: Sorry this took so long! Real life took over, but now I'm back! :D Here be Sergio's POV for the scene we left off in  Part 10.

Comments

[baronessbadger]

Aaaah, so worth the wait.

I love the gradual realization coming to Sergio and the very obvious denial at first...the way his mind tries to compartmentalize sort of mirrors the two sides of his personality, too. That probably doesn't make any sense, but. It's just perfect , the way it's written.

This whatever or whoever had caused the bruise meant for it to last long and for there to be pain, so that this guy will remember… oh, so revealing.

I can't wait for the next part and to find out what's going to happen now that everything is in the open...

<3333

[brontok]

hee, very glad you like it (you might see the fruits of our ~discussions~ in the next part or so..) :-D

[baronessbadger]

I can't waaaait!

Going to read the next one right now! :)

[sophie30]

eu estava com tanta saudades dessa fic,
que pulei de alegria quando vi a atualização.
não nos abandone mais,heim.
love,kiss for you.

[brontok]

não mais desaparecer (sem aviso) de mim! :-D Espero que faz sentido, haha