45 minutes rejecting all possibilities/oneshot/kai x ruki

[buriedinheart]

Title: 45 minutes rejecting all possibilities
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: buriedinheart
Genre: angst, romance, life, retrospective
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: fiction.
Rating: none
Pairing: Kai X Ruki
Bands: the GazettE
Synopsis:  his breath rises and falls, naturally synchronised with kai's. like even their souls knew each other.
Comments: sorry for the long hiatus. :(

Comments

[aiska_eien]

This is simply beautiful. Simple yet poignant. It's calm and meandering and at the end you feel like everything is good in the world.

[buriedinheart]

thank you. especially the last line. it was what i needed to express, and im glad you felt it :)

thanks so much for commenting.

[cherrylng]

I love it. It seems to have this calm feeling between them as they contemplate the future. One worries while the other knows and accept it. :3

[buriedinheart]

thanks so much for commenting <3333333
really, it means a lot. im glad you liked it :)

[cherrylng]

Eh? I'm added as a friend? :3

[thegazettex3]

absolutely beautiful. Honestly, it was wonderful.

It calmed me down and just.. soothed me. I can't get over how much I adore your writing. I'm really glad you returned and wrote something as stunning as this.

<3

[buriedinheart]

i love you so much for all the comments, encouragement and support you have given me these past few months from the start when i started this writing journal.

just... thank you.

[gorgeous_light]

I think I've never read something as inspiering as this, you did an awsome job, really loved it, thank you for the good moment you just gave me =) (sorry about my english, it really sucks ._.)

[buriedinheart]

thanks for such a lovely piece of encouragement :) i am so glad you loved this and that it touched you in some way. im really happy.

and i dont care if your english aint good (it is good), its the thought that counts.

xx

[ringoutthebell]

"...and stress eating away at Takanori until he’s just Ruki, with shades of taka in between."

This is quite lovely :) It's always a rather interesting concept to twiddle with, the idea of where Ruki ends and Takanori starts, and how they can possibly fit each other like jagged edges to make one man whole.

This is a very nice piece, my dear.

[buriedinheart]

yeah, im glad you liked it :)

i was trying to bring across how with kai, takanori remains takanori, kai keeps him sane. keeps ruki aware of where ruki ends and takanori begins. so i changed their names, switching from stage names to real names.

im glad you understood :)
thanks so much for commenting.