(Oneshot) The Ways I Use To Break You

[burningleaf]

Angst, Drama
2050w-ish

Warning: hints of possible domestic violence, crazy timeline, NOT BETAED, WORD VOMIT, REN I LOVE YOU BABY GURL LOLZ

Comments

[ichigotabetai]

Read it. Realized how much domestic abuse is a trigger for me. I would not recommend Junsu getting back to Yoochun anytime at all. So yes, for the good of Inhwan, but I disagree with the ending. Still, for a story, it had a certain emotion and strictly as a story, and outside of my beliefs, it was good. The flow was not quite clear but the images were nice and stark.

[burningleaf]

Yeah, for that reason itself I left it as open as I can. But nuh uh, why would you immediately go to the conclusion that they reconciled? They could've had an accident on their way and they both died boo hoo ((yes this me trying to shade Sister's Keeper uhuh)) and Inhwan gets to go to family #6

Implication and deduction. I don't want anyone to be in his, or your spot. It's unbecomingly cruel.

[7ladies]

i don't get the ending... so do they get inhwan back? but the story is well written. really like the description and narration.

[burningleaf]

Do you want them to? :3

[7ladies]

of course. i work in a line where i see broken families and abandon kids. i think when the kids are more aware of what's happening, they deep down want to be love and really hope to stay with a wonderful family, even if they have weird kinks. i really like yoochun's statement, that when we are a family, we learn from one another, and grow to be stronger for them and for ourselves.

[argonyi]

This story is good :) Read this at 3 am and am wide awake now. Still it confuses me if they got back together or not.