Prison Break Fic: Leap (1/1)

[burntcircles]

Title: Leap (1/1)
Characters: Sara Tancredi, original characters
Rating: PG
Genre: Gen, Non-epilogue compliant (Thanks for coining this term, msgenevieve!)
Length: 1,888 words
Summary: I told him I never talked to her, that she'd kept largely to herself. That she was virtually a stranger to me. I was relaxed but non-committal. Oh, all the little things I

Comments

[lizparker6]

Hmm, very interesting dear. I liked the way you situated and characterized your OC, really.

Also, the letter was a nice and wonderful touch, a good, warm closure.:)

Very nice and original fic.

[burntcircles]

Thanks for your words here, hon, and for taking the time to read. *g*

[burntcircles]

I thought I would never use an OC again after writing Most Beautiful Flower on Earth, but I suppose what the muse wants, the must gets, right? *g* Thanks for reading!

[burntcircles]

I knew I could count on you to be supportive, *g* Thanks for the kind words, dear. Much appreciated. *blows kisses*

[sierra_foxx]

Oh Nona, this is fabulous, really beautiful to read. I was quite taken with your OC in this story which only underlines how well this is written. Sanjay is hilarious! LOL.

And the point is that as we exchanged confidences her loneliness pierced mine, and for someone with a life full of things I can never have, I felt sorry for her.

Oh. This literally makes my heart break for Sara, I liked the analogy of her loneliness 'piercing' the OC's; just added that extra element of 'pain' my heart was feeling.

In case you haven't gathered, I'd love to read more writing from you, young lady. So, so good. :o)

[burntcircles]

Oh! Thanks so, so much, lovely lady. I wasn't letting myself hope that anyone would read this obscure thing, was even unsure whether it would even make sense showing this to the universe. LOL Thanks so much for the words. Glad to know you enjoyed reading what I had so much fun writing. *g*

[burntcircles]

Thanks, Jen! Feels great to be writing again. *g*