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Mar 20, 2005 01:21

Title: Stood Up
Date: 03/19/05
Summary: It happens to all of us. But why?
Genre: drama.. thoughts on paper.
Disclaimer: Mine. Based on a true story.
Dedication: To anyone who’s ever been dicked over.

Stood Up )

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deebeeconfini March 20 2005, 04:12:00 UTC
I want to say beautiful, but I'm not sure that's the right word here. It was very moving. The emotion is so clear that now we can know how it feels, even if we've never been there (which I know most of us have).

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bythethroatx March 20 2005, 09:51:24 UTC
i wanna say that's what i was going for but honestly, i just found myself writing out what i was feeling.

thanks, though.

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bythethroatx March 20 2005, 09:52:04 UTC
too bad every line of it is true, huh.

thanks, em.

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tanitamia March 20 2005, 11:15:54 UTC
a fabulous monologue, one that portrays a feeling that so many of us have had to endure, it kinda sucks to be girls, huh? that was great, hun, i read it like three times in a row.
<3
t~

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bythethroatx March 20 2005, 18:02:36 UTC
you know what sucks? i have to completely re-edit the ending. cuz that's not how it went. at all.

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flatoutdefiance March 20 2005, 13:17:03 UTC
He knows what it’s like to be best friends with someone and have it evolve to another level. You’re so close to someone and then suddenly one day, they’re not with you, and you find yourself missing them, he says. I couldn’t have said it better, myself.

A-fucking-men.

Awesome job, of course.

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__wish__ March 28 2005, 06:00:49 UTC
this is wonderful.
at least the writing let you get some feelings out...it was really great.
hope you're feeling better now.


pee-ess; it's des (slitmywrists_) i got a new el-jay so imma add ya again. =)

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bythethroatx March 28 2005, 12:06:32 UTC
omg des! hiiii.

ill add back. and thanks =]

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