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[c0nfused_loserr]

HEY losers... I have my own poem ready for you guys to go off and critique on. So please just look it over, and say SOMETHING, so I don't feel like it's a total failure. Mind you, I have to read this thing for the poetry festival, and I wouldn't want to kill my reputation as an overachiever! That'd be a horrible thought, eh?
So, just look it over,

Comments

[dasweetman44]

I didn't read it but I like the ryhmes.

[c0nfused_loserr]

Haha. I'm sure you as a little unexperienced 8th grader wouldn't have understood it. *winks*
Nahh. Thanks anyway.

[dasweetman44]

Ugh, loser nerd.

[c0nfused_loserr]

double R child. so try... loserr nerrd. hahaha.
yeah i am. at least i admit it. why won't you admit to being an inexperienced little 8th grader already?

[my__bubbles]

I read it already in Runnels.
And.
I can't understand it.. 'cause there's so many big words.
Big words are good... right?
hahaha.
it's probably kick ass anyways.
Knowing you =P.

[c0nfused_loserr]

Haha. I know you read it in Runnels. Therefore I posted it JUST to annoy you.
Not.
Anyway, yes, big words are good. And it really isn't THAT hard to understand... I swear...
Thanks!

[ankh_khpt]

Can't read it right now because I have to leave in about thirty seconds, but I would just like to note your use of FEMININE RHYMES. Geez, I think you are going to dominate this poetry festival of yours because feminine rhymes=wow.

Okay, I'll stop being weird and obnoxous and actually read it when I have more than five seconds.

[c0nfused_loserr]

Haha. Oh god, what are you talking about now with these feminine rhymes?! Seriously, this is nothing that Mrs. Littel taught us at CTD... woah, now that I think of it, she would be really mad to read this, 'cause I didn't use enough concrete nouns.
Hahaha.
And yes, please do read it, my CTD friend. Critiques are welcome... 'cause I'm sure you're gonna start with those...

[highly_evolved7]

hi, you don't know me, (great introduction i know) but i found you on allie g's friends page...and i was bored so i decided to let you know i figured out your rhyme scheme!

its a -- b-- b-- a.

umm, my names allie by the way.
and your poem is very well written.

sorry if this message creeped you out.

[c0nfused_loserr]

Amusing how I think I do know you... *eyebrow raise* Haha.
And yes, congrats on the figuring out the rhyme scheme! I swear it wasn't THAT hard...
Thanks for the comment, and no your message didn't creep me out.

[highly_evolved7]

yay for non creepy messages

hmm, i think i know you too.... i can't raise my eyebyrow though :(

it wasnt hard. but that might be because i write poetry also.
hmm, who knows?

[c0nfused_loserr]

lol yeah. the eyebrow raising thing is a skill. *winks* i'm just not too good at it.
poetry is fun... 'cept sometimes it's rather annoying to see some of the poetry people write. heh.
oh well. we shall never know.

[weirdshorty]

heheheeee. i likey it. and HA! I UNDERSTOOD THE BIG WORDS IN THERE!!! Aren't u proud of this short flip? i bet you are *wink*
but yessss the rhyme scheme is abba[haha, like the band]
and i dunno reading it kinda gave me something to ponder upon. so yay.

and gooooood luck my wittle 2 day younger overachieving "sister" =D

[c0nfused_loserr]

YAY! Someone likes it! Haha. Go big words man.
I'm real proud of my short flippy sister *nods*.
Haha! I just realized the abba thing. Woah. Sweet.
And as long as it isn't a bad pondering, all is well!
Wittle?! Look whose talking...

[weirdshorty]

and yes, no bad pondering. so all is well! wee!
hehehehe yes. u are wittle. cuz i said so. orrr we can make it more true and sound cooler by saying that ur pseudowittle
hehehee.

[c0nfused_loserr]

Good good for not bad pondering... heh. That statement sucked.
Oh well.
GRR. PSEUDOWITTLE?! You WITTLE FLIPPY FLIP!!! *angry face*
*still angry*
*...still angry*