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[calcgoddess1183]

This is my motivational statement for my Americorps application. The question is: Why do you want to join Ameri-corps? What could you contribute to your Ameri-Corps project? What do you hope to gain from serving as an Ameri-Corps member

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[dargus]

The grammatical issues I will address first. In the first paragraph, first sentence, you should change "areas of the country I have never been to before" to "areas of the country I have never been before". In the first paragraph, second sentence, you should change "make a difference in the world they live in and..." to "make a difference in the world they live and

[calcgoddess1183]

I wanted to tell you thanks for looking at my essay. I have tried to implement the things you have said.

[sunnyfey]

oh this has absolutely nothing to do with your post, besides the fact i think thats a wonderfull essay.

Can I talk to you about job corp? I live in tulsa too, and I really wanted to learn more about it like, so I HAVE to live on campus? Cant I just stay in my appartment? And what did you think of the people there? Were you comfortable? Happy? Do you look back and think of your time there and what you learned as a good decision? How long is the average stay there? Like 1-2 years or what? Did you make friends there? I have alot more questions then that so, thank you so much for your time. And good luck with Americorps

[calcgoddess1183]

I am happy to answer your questions