Title: Broken Ice
Author: calis_1st
Rating: PG
Characters: Neal, Peter, Jones
Spoilers: 5.06, Ice Breaker, and earlier episodes.
Word count: ~ 3200
Disclaimer: Characters are all from the brilliant mind of Jeff Eastin.
Summary: What if Jones arrived a few seconds later .... an alternate ending for "Ice Breaker"
Note: Written in response to a
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I didn't expect Peter to react that way, my heart broke a million times for Neal :( At least it is very canon-ish and in character (Peter lack of understanding is really frustrating).
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Re: "More?" I've thought about going further, but decided it should end here (it might not be a happy ending, but it seemed like the right one). On the other hand, ummm, maybe?
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to comment.
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Very well written and completely in line with what they stand for at the moment.
That line " I'm ready to pull the plug" just killed me.
Congrats
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They were not in a happy place during this ep, and who would have thought that it would get worse. Let's hope they turn that corner soon.
Thanks so much for reading!
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This is a stupid question, but I have to know: did Neal also get punched in the face, or did Jones get there in time? The nosebleed has me confused.
Very powerful image when Peter comes upon Neal looking just like Siegel. Loved Neal's "Bleeding stopped. Feel like shit. Don't need a lecture." and Peter's reaction. Thank you!
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And, no, it was not a stupid question, obviously I should have been clearer. Neal did not get punched in the face (Jones did stop that) but he got a bloody nose from hitting his head. I'm pretty sure I used to get bloody noses in my wild child days from hitting my head (or just, I don't know, walking).
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