FIC: Early Dismissal

Sep 13, 2012 14:27

Title: Early Dismissal
Author: calis_1st
Rating: R
Genre: h/c
Characters: Neal, Peter, other male characters
Spoilers: A little bit for Judgement Day, Parting Shots
Warnings:  risk of child sexual assault. 
Word Count: 3100
Summary:  A current case brings to Neal nightmarish memories of being Danny Brooks.

Disclaimer:  Neal and Peter do not ( Read more... )

character: ellen parker, rating: r, genre: h/c, wordcount: 1000 - 4999, character: neal caffrey, character: other male character, character: peter burke

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micheleeeex September 21 2012, 12:37:57 UTC
Awww, poor Neal!

Great job!

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calis_1st September 21 2012, 13:37:53 UTC
Thank you!

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kanarek13 September 21 2012, 12:53:03 UTC
Wow, great story. Neal reactions to the smell were so intense - poor guy. The mind is indeed a powerful thing. I love it how Peter always made sure Neal was okay and was there for him when he decided to tell Peter about what was happening ♥ I just love it when the boys are like family, always makes me go awwwwwww :D

Thank you for this :D

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calis_1st September 21 2012, 13:54:20 UTC
Thank you so much. I love them together, too, and have really enjoyed seeing how their relationship has deepened since Stealing Home.

I'm glad you liked this; thanks for rec'ing it at the forum (although it's a lot darker than usual for me).

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embroiderama September 21 2012, 13:47:00 UTC
Aw man, NEAL. I love that Peter was there for him, but poor Danny. Gah.

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calis_1st September 21 2012, 16:19:03 UTC
Thank you. Peter will always be there for Neal (I hope).

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angelita26 September 21 2012, 14:20:20 UTC
Very powerful story. I loved the use of flashbacks, and how it all turned out okay in the end. *hugs Neal* Thank you for sharing this one.

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calis_1st September 21 2012, 17:07:36 UTC
Thank you - I wasn't sure about this one, I don't like seeing even fictional children in danger.

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kriadydragon September 21 2012, 19:45:21 UTC
Oh, poor Neal. This was excellent. I love a good PTSD story.

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calis_1st September 21 2012, 21:24:33 UTC
Thanks so much for your kind comments.

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