:O wow. I'm speechless. I never thought of them like this. your characterizations are very interesting, and I want to quote something but there's too many adorable lines♥ can't wait for the continuation~ :D
Haha, the way I think of people always seems to be a little off from the norm, so thank you for reading it with an open mind! I'm definitely looking forward to writing more -- these boys are really so interesting. ;)
you actually made me hate Keybummie, and that's kind of insane. this is so amazing and really unique so far ♥ first of all, I adore Jonghyun's satirical comments; I feel like I'm in his head. And I love Key's characterization- it's really different from the "now" Key, and I can't wait to see how he, and how his relationship with each member develops. We can already see the initial sparks of Key becoming the umma I love so much. Gahhh~ I'm really excited for this fic. Marvellous writing so far :D
LOL. and sorry for the long comment. I just liked it alot! I mean, this is a totally new take on our favorite pair of biffles
you actually made me hate Keybummie, and that's kind of insane. Awww, I hope to redeem him because I actually adore Key like mad! I think a lot of his bitchiness comes from a place of wanting to be cared about and to feel as though he is important -- maybe that's why he plays the scolding mommy role so much himself: if he takes care of the other members, they'll care about him which is kinda like, duh, it's obvious they care about him. I think there is something endearing and a little sad in the way that he always has to be the center of attention: talking the most in interviews, playing it up for the cameras -- it's like, dude, chillax, we think you're great, truly!
sorry for the long comment. I just liked it alot! I mean, this is a totally new take on our favorite pair of biffles Thanks so much for the long comment, I really liked it! And yes, I really wanted to write something that was a different interpretation of the friendship dynamics between Jonghyun and Key and between the entire group.
OMG THIS IS HILARIOUS, CUTE AND AMAZINGLY GOOD AT THE SAME TIME. I lol at too many parts to quote. The flow of it is good and I liked how much detail is put into it. I can't stand your Key though, arrgh such a bitch! Hahah. Can't wait for the next part. You definitely need to write more Shinee fics! ♥
I love how you captured Onew's compulsive need to be part of the in-joke. Thank you! Ahh, I heart Onew so much. He's like the personification of all my teenaged awkwardness and longing to be included by the cool kids (aka JH and Key).
I thought it was interesting how Key's a lot of obnoxious behavior seems natural or attention-seeking And that's the rub, too, that the cool kids are obnoxious because they want attention, to feel important and needed. Key is great because he's not malicious for the sake of being a little bitch, he's doing it for validation of self. The way he dominates the conversation in interviews and plays up to the cameras during performances just hints to me of overcompensation for inner insecurity about himself -- I find his phony bravado fascinating.
i'm sure anything i say would be a replay (>.>) of other people's comments but i really did like this and i'm interested in seeing where it goes next :]
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your characterizations are very interesting, and I want to quote something but there's too many adorable lines♥ can't wait for the continuation~ :D
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Haha, the way I think of people always seems to be a little off from the norm, so thank you for reading it with an open mind! I'm definitely looking forward to writing more -- these boys are really so interesting. ;)
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this is so amazing and really unique so far ♥
first of all, I adore Jonghyun's satirical comments; I feel like I'm in his head. And I love Key's characterization- it's really different from the "now" Key, and I can't wait to see how he, and how his relationship with each member develops. We can already see the initial sparks of Key becoming the umma I love so much.
Gahhh~ I'm really excited for this fic. Marvellous writing so far :D
LOL. and sorry for the long comment. I just liked it alot! I mean, this is a totally new take on our favorite pair of biffles
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Awww, I hope to redeem him because I actually adore Key like mad! I think a lot of his bitchiness comes from a place of wanting to be cared about and to feel as though he is important -- maybe that's why he plays the scolding mommy role so much himself: if he takes care of the other members, they'll care about him which is kinda like, duh, it's obvious they care about him. I think there is something endearing and a little sad in the way that he always has to be the center of attention: talking the most in interviews, playing it up for the cameras -- it's like, dude, chillax, we think you're great, truly!
sorry for the long comment. I just liked it alot! I mean, this is a totally new take on our favorite pair of biffles
Thanks so much for the long comment, I really liked it! And yes, I really wanted to write something that was a different interpretation of the friendship dynamics between Jonghyun and Key and between the entire group.
Thanks so much for reading!
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Awww, poor bitchy Key, I will redeem him for you because everyone should love Key, he's so bratty and yet sweet and caring.
I'm glad you enjoyed the first part and thank you for reading and feedbacking!
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Thank you! Ahh, I heart Onew so much. He's like the personification of all my teenaged awkwardness and longing to be included by the cool kids (aka JH and Key).
I thought it was interesting how Key's a lot of obnoxious behavior seems natural or attention-seeking
And that's the rub, too, that the cool kids are obnoxious because they want attention, to feel important and needed. Key is great because he's not malicious for the sake of being a little bitch, he's doing it for validation of self. The way he dominates the conversation in interviews and plays up to the cameras during performances just hints to me of overcompensation for inner insecurity about himself -- I find his phony bravado fascinating.
Thanks very much for reading and feedbacking!
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