GP vs. CS, Part II

[callisto_chan]

Since there's a demand, apparently, I wrote more. In this segment: comparison of the main characters, the primary villians, and the soldier teams. Sorry it's so long.

Comments

[erin_hime]

I was going to comment yesterday on this, but work sort of kicked out of me. So I'll respond now.

One this desribes this: character development. And three years of pondering and creating characters, and knowing what works and what doesn't. That's how most of my characters get to be so...all right. I look at past characters, look at what annoys me, and fix that about them. ^^;

I see Sailor Aeolus, and I always think of mine. >.< Doesn't help that I still pretty much have the character. Heh.

I'm glad you've decided to redo this story, because it's so great, and so much better now that you're older and stuff. i wish I could have been a better writing when I was your age. Imagine my stuff now if I had. Should be interesting to see what you can do in another three years, if the opportunity ever came up. ^^;

[callisto_chan]

It's not really a redo; I thought up most stuff independantly and only kept a few things because I either liked them, or were a slight nod to the past ones. (And some were just coincidence like Persephone and Demeter).

Yeah, I'll agree -- the way you develop characters changes a lot over three-four years. I'm not sure if the CS soldiers are 'better' than GP, but I know a lot more about them. I go into a bit more detail than I previously did.

I think you're a good writer. ^^; And yeah, it'd be interesting to see what I'm like in three more years -- would I look back on this and cringe or just go 'meh'? :P Only time will tell.