Go With The Flow (Or Make Your Own) Part 2 for ravenflight21

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[ravenflight21]

Oh, yay! What a wonderful present - thank you so much!

I could really feel the heaviness of the burden on Arthur's shoulders after his father's death, and Merlin's heartbreak as Arthur seems to push him away.

I love the way you set scenes - the musicians playing and children running around at Samhain, and the polished windows and floors before the coronation.

And the story's full of suspense - from the opening sentence, to the creaking open of Uther's door, to the "will they, won't they" of Arthur and Merlin.

I think my favourite line was during Arthur's drunk scene, when he tells Merlin: "you're the only steady thing right now. So you need to stay."

Lovely! <3

[sally_maria]

I loved this - such a warm story. Pining!Arthur and Oblivious!Merlin are always such fun, and it's good to see them come together and be happy.

[shes_gone]

oooh, I loved the crap out of this! gorgeous in love!Arthur and so besotted he can't see what's right in front of him!Merlin. :D <333333333 lovely!

[hiko73]

Oh so lovely! The ending was fantastic and I love how you wrote the sex, not graphic but still beautiful & hot.

[darlulu]

I just discovered this fic for the first time and absolutely adored it. It just hit all my buttons and made me feel all gooey inside about M/A. Thanks for posting. :)