Addiction

[camouflagecat]

Title: Addiction
Pairing: GTOP

Genre: Angst, slight smut
Warnings: R to be safe I guess? + swearing
Type: One-shot
Wordcount: 2624
Disclaimer: I don't own Big Bang, just the story I wrote.
Summary: To tell the truth, Jiyong knew something even more addicting than smoking.

A/N I'm new to LJ and this is my first ever attempt on fan fiction. English isn

Comments

[yangguifei17]

ah i liked it! you write well, especially considering that this is not your mother language. AND this is your first fic? waaah im so impressed. good job.

and i totally think ji still smokes. like... a LOT. but that's just me.

spot!

[dyealer]

..kekeke..Ur not the only one that thinks JiYong still smoking..but I think now he smoke secretly =p

I am impressed wth this fic considering that this is ur first! pleaseee do write more! =DD

Re: spot!

[camouflagecat]

Yeah idk, I mean TOP was caught smoking in the filming of the Love Song MV. As it might be a good stress relief maybe Ji could still be doing it... I don't really care if he does or not tho :P

Thank you for commenting!

[nitsa1980]

This is your first > Damn, it is really good. I would love to read a sequel of this story :)
Good job, keep going :)

[camouflagecat]

I've marked it as a one-shot, but I originally planned to maybe make a sequel to it... since I left the ending so open. But we'll see.

Thank you for the nice comment! ^^

[ext_655209]

Are you sure this is your first?? Are you?? Cus if it is then WOW!!! I like it soooooo much <3333

And i think he still smokes too =D Not that im happy about it but anyway its his life ^.^ (and he looks hot doing it <33 lol =D)

[ext_655209]

Ohh... and i hope you made a sequel or something =D But this is your decision ^_^ If you`re doing it, im going to read it [[and falling in love with it.. lol]] for sure ^.~

[camouflagecat]

Yeah, of course it would be better if he didn't, but I agree, he looks hot doing it >__<

Thank you for the nice comment, it means a lot to me, I'll use it as motivation to write more lol (and sequel, hmm well, might come in the future, you never know...) -^___^-

[vvipforseungri]

I know this is angst but... cockblock Ri! :)

I liked it, which is big since I normally shy/cringe away from GTOP.

[camouflagecat]

Poor Ri seemed to be at the wrong place at the wrong time lol.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it ^___^

[atenais_pala]

Oh, please, you have to write a sequel! Please?

I loved this story. Is this your first fic? And english isn't your tongue either! I'm really impressed.

I really like the way you wrote about Jiyong's unreciprocated feelings. It's not easy to hide our feelings, mainly when you see that person all the time, when we feel the love growing stronger, if possible. But I don't know, I felt that Seung was teasing him. Was necessary to kiss him in the earlobe? Maybe he acts this way unaware, but I have no doubt that he was teasing him.

And Seung's reaction was really realistic. He didn't responded to the kiss, but he didn't refuse either. He was taken back, a little surprised, but I don't thing he hated this.

I'm wondering what would happen if Seung Ri had not come in that very moment.
Again, you have to write a sequel...
Thank you!

[camouflagecat]

Yeah, I was trying to understand what Jiyong would've felt in his situation and what both of their actions would've been. I like going into details and bring out emotions like that when I'm writing (in this case especially when writing angst).

Thank you for your comment, that was really nice ;__;