Comments | carcassi: SV Fic: 1,001 Kryptonian Nights (Chlark, Adult), Chapter 5/6

carcassi

SV Fic: 1,001 Kryptonian Nights (Chlark, Adult), Chapter 5/6

Mar 26, 2010 20:34

Yeah, your eyes aren't deceiving you, it's actually an update. I promised this for Wednesday, which wasn't possible, so I cleared Friday night and did my best to get this out for you ( Read more... )

chlark nc-17, 1001 nights, fairytale chlark fic, chlark fiction, het fiction, chlark fic

Comments 24

angelbsb March 27 2010, 01:07:19 UTC

omg chloe did not know it would hurt him . oh my gosh PPMS

carcassi March 28 2010, 23:19:44 UTC

Awww, thanks for commenting, and sorry about the evil cliffie!! It'll all work out, trust me. :)

phantom_queen March 27 2010, 01:25:19 UTC

Great chapter, glad you updated the fic. I'm guessing Chloe wasn't trying to hurt him she thought he'd like to see the kryptonite.

I like the way you are writing the Chloe/Kal-El relationship/interaction. The comments about the pet Pekingese was funny.

carcassi March 28 2010, 23:56:31 UTC

Hee, so good to hear you loved the pet Pekingese comment. I admit, I did too!!

As always, thank you for your wonderful feedback, I really appreciate it! :)

babydee1 March 27 2010, 03:58:33 UTC

Oh, no you didn't! *sharpens pitchfork*

What the heck just happened? That wasn't Real!Chloe, was it? :-(

Be back with a longer review later, but I loved this chapter, and can't wait for the final one. Nicely done, Debs! :-D

carcassi March 29 2010, 19:01:30 UTC

Hee, gotcha, Dee!! Considering that you're the Queen of the Cliffies, I'm taking that as poetic justice. *eg*

*Dodges pitchfork*

I hope the move's going well, and I can't wait for the Dee Review!!!

(And only one chappie left before I can get back to *your* fic, YAY!) (By which time, the cliffies will all have been resolved, of course. Not that that was my plan or anything....*skips off merrily*)

WOW mari2anne March 27 2010, 05:36:06 UTC

WOW!!! Talk about a sucker-punch from left field! I so did NOT see that coming. Even with the evil-cliffie warning, I was going full speed when that cliffie hit and WHAM!!! RIGHT OFF THE EDGE! Didn't even have time to hook up the climbing gear (don't know if BabyDee told you I had to buy climbing gear because of all the evil cliffies she kept throwing us over ( ... )

Re: WOW carcassi March 29 2010, 19:18:12 UTC

Eep, sorry about that zinger I tossed you!! At least I gave you an evil-cliffie alert, but--hee!--I guess nobody saw that one coming. :P

(don't know if BabyDee told you I had to buy climbing gear because of all the evil cliffies she kept throwing us over...)

*Points upward at Dee's comment* I have a feeling she may want to borrow your climbing gear this time around. Poetic justice, much? *Chortles evilly*

I WAS smiling through the whole thing enjoying how Chloe is trying to ground a soaring wingless god; how wonderfully you describe all the awesome surroundings and how everyone is dressed and acting; how perfectly you portray every emotion the handsome Sultan feels everytime he looks at Chloe... AND SHAZAAM! she FLOORS him without a single punch.I'm glad you were enjoying it, at least until the end... :D And actually, tbh, Chloe had already pretty much floored the poor Sultan even before the K-rock made an appearance so, in a way, the cliffie's not THAT much of a departure from the rest of the chapter. That said, though, ( ... )

Re: WOW mari2anne March 30 2010, 06:18:01 UTC

Oh, you need NEVER apologize for making the story so interesting... (and I secretly LOVE cliff-hangers... shhh, don't tell Dee!)
;)

megamom2 March 27 2010, 10:23:43 UTC

carcassi March 29 2010, 19:23:19 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked my take on Chloe! In any universe, she just isn't the type to let herself be intimidated. :)