Halloween (A Jacob/Bella AU fic)

[carcrash_heartz]

TITLE: Halloween

PAIRING/CHARACTERS: Jacob Black/Bella Swan, mention of Charlie, Billy, and Edward

INSPIRATION: The icon I’ve pasted at the beginning of the story. I’m not sure who made it, but I love it, and it completely inspired me to write this, because it’s so completely Jacob. Thank you!!!

RATING: MA/NC-17

GENRE: AU/Romance

SPOILERS: Twilight and

Comments

[_sweet_poison_]

oooooooooooooooomiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigawd. that was freaking awesome.

ever since i finished the series, i've needed some more twilight in my life! thank you, thank you, thank you!

and i love jacob!!!!!!!!!!!

[carcrash_heartz]

Thank you! You kinda made my day, bb. Think I should post it on the Jacob/Bella comm? Give me strength, girl!

Seriously - so glad you enjoyed! *hugs*

[_sweet_poison_]

yes, yes, post it!!

and then write another one. k, thanks! ;)

[writingvixen]

I don't have time to read it now, I'm heading out in 3 minutes, BUT I'm replying so you know that I'M READING IT AS SOON AS I GET HOME!

SQUEEEEEEEE!!!

I love that icon and can't WAIT to sink my teeth into this story. Eeeee!

I'm excited. :-D

[writingvixen]

Omigosh.

Hot, hot, hot,hothothot!

I need to take a cold shower, whoa. Honestly, this is really great writing E. You should post this because a lot of people deserve to read it. The premise is really interesting and I love Jacob/Bella, you know this. And seeing what could have been is just really cool.

Great job!

I smiled an uneasy, uncertain smile as I stood before her in nothing but my boxers, feeling unexplainably vulnerable. Though I’d been naked in front of my pack more times than I cared to count, with Bella, it wasn’t the same. I actually cared what she thought of me.

“So what do you think, Bells?” I asked, my nervousness causing me to speak.

“I think … I want to see more of you, Jacob Black

This moment is really great. I like his thinking about nudity in front of his pack. It's just a nice detail to definitely include.

“I’ll always put you back together, Bells. And I promise, I’m going to make sure you’re never broken again.”

Very touching line.

Choking back what felt like a golf ball of excitement in my throat,

[carcrash_heartz]

I really couldn't ask for a better review than that. I hope you're aware! You're soooo sweet to type all of that out for me. I was smiling ear to ear as I read it. It means a lot coming from you ♥

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I knew I could count on my other "Jacob girl".

THANK YOU!!!

[alliedaisy]

I am about to go to bed but I will be reading this as soon as I get a chance!! YEAH!!

[carcrash_heartz]

Enjoy, bb. Let me know what you think. I know you're an Edward girl, but you have to admit, Taylor is a honey ♥

[vadersqueen]

OH WOW E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SO LOVED IT!!! I hadn't realized how much I missed your writing until i read this!!! That was awesome! You know i'm an Edward girl but Jacob does have alittle spark from me and this was so well done!!!!! Great job sweets!

[carcrash_heartz]

Thanks, C! I know you're an Edward girl, but it's nice to know you feel some love for Jacob, too. I'm torn between both of them, liking them both. I have Bella syndrome when it comes to choosing.

So glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to give Edward his due, next ... muwahaha.

[carcrash_heartz]

Thank you, J! *smishes*

I appreciate your input. It helps me to know what I've done right, so I can do it again ;)

I realize you're primarily an Edward girl, but it's nice that you're willing to give Jacob a shot now and then, too. I do plan on writing an Edward/Bella fic. It's not that I like one better than the other, really, it's just that I like both.

Posted it to two comms. I'm nervous, but we'll see what happens.

Thanks again, sweet girl! You're very sweet to take the time to type up a little review for me.