Halloween (A Jacob/Bella AU fic)

Oct 22, 2008 14:46


TITLE: Halloween

PAIRING/CHARACTERS: Jacob Black/Bella Swan, mention of Charlie, Billy, and Edward

INSPIRATION: The icon I’ve pasted at the beginning of the story. I’m not sure who made it, but I love it, and it completely inspired me to write this, because it’s so completely Jacob. Thank you!!!

RATING: MA/NC-17

GENRE: AU/Romance

SPOILERS: Twilight and ( Read more... )

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bestthingaround October 23 2008, 19:21:15 UTC
this is great! It stays really true to jacob's voice, and setting it on halloween made for a really cute scene-setter. Be proud, show it off! :D

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carcrash_heartz October 23 2008, 19:55:26 UTC
Thank you! Coming from you, another writer, I really take your compliment to ♥. I'm glad you enjoyed it ... even though I know you're an Edward sort of girl ;)

*hugs*

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bestthingaround October 24 2008, 16:55:58 UTC
aww, you're welcome. I may be all for eddie, but I have this soft spot about jacob's pov...I love his tone. ;)

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rawrsky October 23 2008, 19:36:44 UTC
ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod

that was so great. wow. ...ohmygod...ohmygod...ohmygod

can't breathe right now. ...ohmygod

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carcrash_heartz October 23 2008, 19:56:34 UTC
THANK YOU! Seriously, you're too kind. I'm thrilled that you liked it so much. It was my first Jacob/Bella fic. You've encouraged me to write more ♥

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little_linds October 23 2008, 19:58:05 UTC
Here via sortofbeautiful, I LOVED THIS! First of all, I loved the Halloween aspect, LOVE! And I thought the interaction between the two was so true to character. I love how Bella still has her issues (that girl will never not have issues, I'm convinced) and Jacob was still being himself. It was hot! and not overdone. Good job!

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carcrash_heartz October 23 2008, 22:03:41 UTC
Thank you! I thought Halloween would be fun, considering it's right around the corner. Plus, the icon, and then Jacob. I couldn't help but be inspired. Just glad you enjoyed it.

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stormingheavens October 23 2008, 20:12:36 UTC
Woah, that was really great. <3 I really enjoyed reading it and I like that you stayed true to the characters. :D

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carcrash_heartz October 23 2008, 22:04:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. I aim to please ;)

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teshara1973 October 23 2008, 20:46:11 UTC
Beautiful story i really loved it!!!! Have you witten any other J/B fic??? if so point me in that direction!!!!

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carcrash_heartz October 23 2008, 22:05:35 UTC
A million thanks :)

This is my first J/B story, but hopefully not my last. I don't have a ton of time to write, but when I get time I enjoy it. As I write more, I'll be sure to share. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it.

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