Halloween (A Jacob/Bella AU fic)

[carcrash_heartz]

TITLE: Halloween

PAIRING/CHARACTERS: Jacob Black/Bella Swan, mention of Charlie, Billy, and Edward

INSPIRATION: The icon I’ve pasted at the beginning of the story. I’m not sure who made it, but I love it, and it completely inspired me to write this, because it’s so completely Jacob. Thank you!!!

RATING: MA/NC-17

GENRE: AU/Romance

SPOILERS: Twilight and

Comments

[floweryscent]

that was great! so hot. I loved it! :D

[carcrash_heartz]

*send you thanks*

Seriously, I appreciate the comment. I enjoyed writing it. Jacob is ♥

[the_angry_pixie]

that was a really wonderful read. you shouldn't feel nervous about posting this on the jacob comms. theyre gonna eat it up. ;)

i enjoyed reading the halloween factor, cause i dont ever celebrate it. and the sex was hot. not in a steamy way (well kind of) but more in an in-character and realistic way. I love well written first-time fics, and you just know that with jacob and bella it would be really sweet and special like that.

i really encourage you to write more J/B fic. puh-leeeeeeease! =)

[carcrash_heartz]

Thank you for using the word wonderful. You made my evening. I appreciate that.

I'm glad you think I shouldn't feel nervous, but with it being my first time posting one of my fics on a comm, I couldn't help it. It will be easier from now on, I think.

I tried my best to keep the two characters "in character". I tend to like fan fic the best when writers do this, so it's what I do as well. I could have made the sex scene "steamier", but I thought with it being their first time it wouldn't be steamy, as much as it would be a little awkward, anxious, and emotional. I'm pleased that you think I conveyed all of that.

Thanks again for the comment. Was sweet. I will most likely be writing more J/B fic. I don't have tons of time to write, but this one was fun, so I'll try to whip something else up, soon.

[the_angry_pixie]

I could have made the sex scene "steamier", but I thought with it being their first time it wouldn't be steamy, as much as it would be a little awkward, anxious, and emotional.

i completely agree. and i always appreciate first-time fics more if they convey that. while i think jacob would be a bit more instinctual than your average teenage boy when it comes to sex, i still think he would be awkward, and in my mind, just so nervous that he might hurt bella. heehee and i've just realised that the one time i wrote a first-time fic with J/B, i set it on christmas eve. haha J/B writers must have a thing about the holidays.

[havens]

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that is me, keysmashing over this fantastic fic. and oh my god, that icon keeps cracking me up. i loved this so much! <3

[carcrash_heartz]

Thanks so much! I appreciate your taking a minute to comment. It inspires me to write more :)

[absterpuff]

Ooooooooeeeeee! I loved this...very well written! And if things did go differently in New Moon, then I suspect that it would go the way you have written it here. (that is if NM catered to adult audiences lol). Jacob and Bella's sexytimes was HOT, but at the same time had that mix of tenderness and sweetness that is J/B :) All those times Jake listened to the beat of Bella's heart was tooooo cute, I loved that. If you write anymore J/B, make sure to post it over at sortofbeautiful so I don't miss it! :)

[carcrash_heartz]

Agree. NM wasn't exactly written for adult audiences, was it? Too bad, really ;)

Poor Jacob, robbed of what Bella almost gave in to, thanks to Edward's rash decision to kill himself. Sigh.

I'm sort of an odd duck though on the Twilight front. I love love love Jacob/Bella together, but I like Edward/Bella, too. I'm not opposed to them at all, and not a huge side chooser, though if I had to choose I'm pretty sure I'd choose J. Something about him. Plus Edward is cold and that always eeps me out a little.

I will definitely share any other J/B fics I write on sortofbeautiful.

BTW I love your icon. Did you make it?

[absterpuff]

Don't get me wrong, I like Edward, he's cool, but I LOVE Jacob. You're right, there's just something about him and I can't help but love him hehe.

And the icon was made by the lovely bluesuzanne :)

[carcrash_heartz]

Thanks for letting me know. Sorry I'm slow to respond. I really do love it ... and Jake. too

[saramiskismet]

So, first of all, my icon is highly appropriate :D

Anyway, comments as I read:
lmao, vampire movie.
ooh. intense way for it to just come out in the open. btw, i love that icon, i've had it for a while, and using it as a fanfic prompt was a greattt idea.
I asked you before if my being half-naked bothered you. I’ll ask again,” I teased, a naughty smirk overtaking my lips. I do believe I have the vapors! (I cackled deviously when I read this!)
“Love is an understatement, you know?” OH FLUFFY SMUT. THOU HAST SLAIN ME.
The fact that we were sharing in that newness for the first time, together, made the event that much sweeter. You fucking kill me. Somehow, this manages to be even more poetic and beautiful than it is sexy, and it is quite sexy.
.... A PLUS-PLUS.

[carcrash_heartz]

YES so appropriate. Love it! Did you make? Seriously though ... how completely pervy fo I feel for thinking naughty thoughts when I look at it, know he's 100% jailbait. Ugh!

It makes me happy to know that you and others have enjoyed this. I had fun writing it and would like to write more as inspiration strikes. Thanks for referring to it as poetic. I think the best sex, is.

Thank you for the kind comment (which btw, in parts made me giggle). I really appreciate it. ♥