Halloween (A Jacob/Bella AU fic)

[carcrash_heartz]

TITLE: Halloween

PAIRING/CHARACTERS: Jacob Black/Bella Swan, mention of Charlie, Billy, and Edward

INSPIRATION: The icon I’ve pasted at the beginning of the story. I’m not sure who made it, but I love it, and it completely inspired me to write this, because it’s so completely Jacob. Thank you!!!

RATING: MA/NC-17

GENRE: AU/Romance

SPOILERS: Twilight and

Comments

[alliedaisy]

Oh Wow! This was great E! Seriously loved it! I echo what other have said. Seeing as this was their first time, it was just steamy enough. I adore that Jacob used his fingers first. Not sure why, but I just do. *blushes* That was hot! You really did keep them true to who they are. I have so meny other thoughts on this but.........it's late and I can't think straight after reading this! GUH! Loved it even if I am an Edward girl! ;-D

[carcrash_heartz]

A leave it to you to just come and say that, girl. You really do speak your mind, don't you bb? I'm glad you liked it. I know you're an Edward girl, but come on ... Jacob/Taylor could soooo be Pete's little brother. Admit it. That, in and of itself, increases his hotness quotient by about a zillion. I think he's a doll. I'd hit it ;)

Thanks for reading, hun. So glad you enjoyed.

[carcrash_heartz]

Thanks so much! I appreciate the comment, and I am glad you enjoyed it. Jacob is a sweetie. I'm an Edward/Jacob girl, and adore both. I'm a Bella, I guess ♥

hotter than hot!

[azulskies]

you know I'm not the biggest Jake fan but this is seriously AMAZING E! You are the queen of fic, seriously ;)

♥

Re: hotter than hot!

[carcrash_heartz]

I know you aren't, so this compliment, coming from you, means so much, E! Thank you! I appreciate your sweetness. Not sure if I'm Queen, but I'll take that title and run, if you wanna give it to me. ♥ u chica!

[x_deadalive]

I'm not Team Jacob. But, goddamn, that was amazing. :D

[carcrash_heartz]

*blushes*

Thank you. Seriously, comments like that mean so much. Glad you enjoyed it.

WOW!

[penny1974]

Girl! Words do not even describe how that made me feel, when I can be a bit more coherent I will comment further! Even though I am a Edward girl, I have to admit that that was hot and all the details just made it an extension of New Moon! Loved it and you are truly talented! Hugs!