The Spectator (one-shot)

[cardi_gan]

                Ueda Tatsuya was an observer. He always had been. As a child, instead of playing with the other children on his street, he would sit on a nearby wall and watch as little boys played cowboys and Indians, chased the little girls and accused them of having ‘girl bugs’. It never occurred to Tatsuya that he could join in; after all he

Comments

[erikaoi]

Its a lovely fic.so well developed.love it.

[cardi_gan]

Thank you, I'm so glad you think so :) ♥

[cardi_gan]

Thanks! Haha tomorrow is mission: 'read more Ryoda' day, so hopefully I can talk to more Ryoda writers! :3
Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it since this is the first time I've posted my writing ♥

[dcsprouse001]

This Asian ♥ your fic. :]
The relationship between Ryo and Ueda was really cute!
Your description of the two at the beginning was extremely well written.

Well, to me it was. :]

Keep on writing, ne~! ♥ :3

[cardi_gan]

hahaha thank you so much! ♥
I'm glad you think so, because I was worried that I would get many things wrong since I'm new :S
But thank you for the support and I'll definitely do my best :) ♥

[junsuinokaitou]

too much awesomeness for me. *-*
This was beautiful and so fitting.
<3
You stole my heart~ <3

/chiyakenyu (writing from my other jourmal)

[cardi_gan]

oh wow, thank you for such a lovely reply :)
I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and the comments I've received have made my day :3
I'm very excited to read more fanfiction too!
Thank you again for reading and commenting :) ♥

[roughededged]

WOW
This was just so beautiful and sweet
I really enjoyed this fic :)

[cardi_gan]

Thank you so much ♥
I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)