Fic: Butterfly Effect 33/? (BWOC, Tommy/Merton, NC17)

May 27, 2007 09:14

Yeah. So I wrote something. I have lost the ability to judge the quality of my own writing, however, and I really have no idea if I'm still on track toward the ever-changing ending or what. But hey, I wrote something, and that's one more chapter toward putting this bad boy to bed ( Read more... )

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farferello May 27 2007, 13:40:36 UTC
That was yummy, though good for Merton having some sense to worry about the consequences if they got caught, but I'm sure it's going to be a lot harder for him to resist eventually, now they get to be sneaky. :D I'm really glad there's another part, and I think your writing and descriptions are great.

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carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:16:33 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad (and relieved!) that you are still enjoying my very looong work in progress.

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rabidfan May 27 2007, 14:34:37 UTC

"I'm sorry, I thought...was I supposed to ask first?"

That made me smile! That and Tommy asking if Merton would still help with the math...yeah.

I'm glad the blockade has softened...I'm looking forward to Thanksgiving. No matter how long it takes to get there!

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carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:17:21 UTC
Hee. Clueless!Tommy is the cutest thing ever, and that's really the only reason I'm determined to finish this damn thing. I'm hopeful that Thanksgiving will be upon us shortly. Maybe I'll just skip ahead.

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spoiledjap May 27 2007, 14:50:22 UTC
I'm so glad that these boys are finally on the same page. It's only taken most of the damned school year...teenagers, we've got to love them.

ps. How are you?

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carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:19:06 UTC
The sad part is that in story terms, it's only been like three months.

I'm fine; the usual, you know. Work, sleep, rinse, repeat. Hopefully your life is more interesting than mine.

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spoiledjap May 28 2007, 01:32:35 UTC
It's been a long school year ;). I still love it and hope that both of them will get their acts together.

My life is the same as yours, wait for the phone call to work at 6 efin am every morning and then come home. I can't wait until I start the grant work.

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macteague May 27 2007, 15:52:32 UTC
::insert glee here::

Butterfly Effect! Lovely chapter, I'm so glad you posted it. :)

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carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:19:23 UTC
Thanks : )

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trevorfrost May 27 2007, 16:43:18 UTC
Squee Butteryfly effect... YAY!! That is all lol...

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carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:19:37 UTC
Thanks for reading : )

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