Getting There

Nov 08, 2011 18:50

Title: Getting There

Author: Cartographical

Summary: Life isn’t so easy with a sniper around. Very vague spoilers for 4x09, Kill Shot.

Author’s Notes: Blame Jill and Fi and Sara, for badgering me relentlessly. It turns out that I will do just about anything so that I don’t have to read “WHEN CARTO POSTS” more than ten or twelve thousand times in a ( Read more... )

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tammini November 10 2011, 20:35:56 UTC
This is really really good. I just don't like Rick anymore (I'm not dropping the H-bomb, just yet), so the fact that you had me on their side is a tremendous achievement! :)

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cartographical November 11 2011, 04:06:49 UTC
COME TO THE DARK SIDE TAM. Or is it the light side. I don't know. I am glad I got you on their side at least for a minute or two :)

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rosie_spleen November 11 2011, 08:03:59 UTC
Loved it, thank you. Really appreciate both of them, and love how you've worked in her fear of losing him to your story. Thanks for sharing.

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cartographical November 14 2011, 02:30:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story, and thank YOU for reviewing!

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tashadan November 11 2011, 14:11:11 UTC
This. Is just beautiful! So raw and at the same time so deftly crafted! I did not see the "I love you, too" coming and it felt like a punch in the gut and an epiphany at the same time. YES! This is how it has to happen!
Loved the "Like hell it isn't" knockdown-mirror.
And, thanks to your version, for the first time I actually GOT why she might REALLY not be ready for a relationship with him. For the first time it isn't just a lame writers' plot but makes intratextual sense

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cartographical November 14 2011, 02:47:08 UTC
Thank you!!! I am sure it will never ever happen like this but it is kind of fun to think about it, I guess?

And yeah, I feel like now there's always the "Why isn't Beckett banging Castle against a wall" that needs to be addressed, because, really, can we get some action here?

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dally1121 November 12 2011, 18:08:17 UTC
This was so goooood. Kate's confession was perfect and heartbreaking. So happy to read more fic from you!! :D

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cartographical November 14 2011, 02:47:38 UTC
Oh thank you! I am glad you liked it!

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