Comments | casi_casi: cardboard kingdom.

casi_casi

cardboard kingdom.

Mar 22, 2011 23:02

Title: Cardboard Kingdom
Pairing: Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: Starts off in the good old days and moves through the years quite quickly.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

( we were friends and that's as far as it went )

fic, sergio ramos, fernando torres

Comments 37

difusion March 22 2011, 19:47:31 UTC

This was fucking perfect. My heart right now, it's filled with something I can't possible describe even if I tried.

casi_casi March 23 2011, 21:35:40 UTC

I'm so glad. Thank you very much, what a lovely comment.

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casi_casi March 23 2011, 21:37:20 UTC

Ohh, thank you very much! That's so wonderful to hear. I'm so glad that the first of my stories that you've read is one you enjoyed. :)

cricket213 March 22 2011, 21:38:51 UTC

"You, now? You're more than anything I've ever had." Favorite line. This was really, truly an AMAZING job and I am so in love with this I want to read it again already.

Please tell me you will have more fic for us soon??? :D

casi_casi March 23 2011, 21:38:09 UTC

Ohhh, thank you so much. You're very kind.

I can't make any promises as I'm a very slow writer, but I certainly plan to continue writing. :)

cricket213 March 24 2011, 04:08:49 UTC

Yay! :)

kissmecait17 March 23 2011, 00:14:11 UTC

I am very much in love with this. It's so wonderful My favorite:
I hope you know that my feelings for you haven't changed. We were just keeping our secret. I wish you had come over like you said you would.

Oh, thank fuck.

casi_casi March 23 2011, 21:38:39 UTC

Ah, thank you so very much!

freakmejc128 March 23 2011, 03:34:17 UTC

Wow, I'm sort of dumbstruck after reading this. It's just so...complete. That's a really weird thing to say, but trust me it's a compliment. The detail and the honesty that you put into this are amazing and I really felt the emotion behind each part.

Your characterization is amazing. This might be my favorite Fernando ever. He's so hard to figure out sometimes, and I think that makes him seem aloof or arrogant, but I love that you sort of explain him and make him seem so real.

Also, this is the probably the most perfect description of Sergio: He's the one who picks people up from clubs, powder under their noses and a combination of sweat and semen and alcohol on their skin, in the middle of the night and says, "I'll come back in the morning to check up on you" rather than "You're an idiot."

Anyway, yeah, I love this.

casi_casi March 23 2011, 21:40:20 UTC

Oh, god, what an amazing comment. Thank you so much. Everything you've said means the world to me. That you found this realistic and honest is the most I could have hoped for.

♥