cardboard kingdom.

[casi_casi]

Title: Cardboard Kingdom
Pairing: Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: Starts off in the good old days and moves through the years quite quickly.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

Comments

[influira]

A funny look crosses Sergio's face - something like sadness, at something that has come along too late, or at something that has, for too long, gone misinterpreted. "I thought that you were something unusual from the very beginning, Fernando."
this is. just. perfect.

wait, and,
"You, now? You're more than anything I've ever had."
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askdflkasjfl. ugh. i wish i had the right words, WORTHY words, to tell you how much i loved this - about how utterly perfect and beautiful this was. exquisite, really. i could quote whole sections. it just felt. i don't know. i'm going to sound stupid, but it felt so realistic and just. i loved it. i don't know. i love love love loved it. don't think i've read anything like this before, and just. i wish i could write as beautifully as you do to tell you how much i adored this.

ily♥

[casi_casi]

Ohhh, Neda, I'm so glad that you liked this! So, so glad. Thank you for that beautiful comment. To get feedback with the word 'realistic' in it really does mean the world.

♥

[dld_ftw]

Wow. This one just knocked me back on my heels. The depth of the characterization...just...DAMN. Really, truly gorgeous. Extraordinary. I know someone who is going to go nuts over this story (besides me).

Thank you so much for sharing this.

[casi_casi]

Thank you, really. Your comment is so generous.

[dld_ftw]

Seriously one of the best things I've read in the fandom. Hands down.

[casi_casi]

Oh, god. You're lovely.

[distira]

oh the emotion here is so quiet and lovely. and the way you've characterized both of them is different and refreshing. beautiful work.

[casi_casi]

Thank you so much. That really is so reassuring to hear.

[titania_torres]

lovely. i love how careful everything is and just all of the interactions. and the way fernando thinks.

[casi_casi]

Thank you.

[akillia555]

amazing. love the style.

[casi_casi]

Thank you very much. :)