counterpoint; chapter three.

[casi_casi]

Title: Counterpoint
Chapter: 3 of 4
Characters: David Silva / David Villa; Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres; Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: AU. A story told out of time in twelve parts; here are the next three. Apologies for the wait.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

| Chapter 1 |

Comments

[casi_casi]

I'm sorry you find it depressing, but thank you for reading!

[dld_ftw]

So freaking well written and so many great lines - this one destroyed me: "They ended up on the same page - though once you're there, there's nowhere to go."

I'm not sure how you will wrap it up in one more part, but this is amazing.

[casi_casi]

Ohhh, thank you so much. What a lovely comment. I really hope you'll like the last part. ♥

[difusion]

oh fuck. this was awesome.

okay it was more than that but i can't think of a better adjective. i'm sorry. i loved this. oh sergio, i hope he does. or at least cry.

[casi_casi]

Oh, thank you. ♥

[influira]

wow, this is actually breaking my heart oh my fucking god

like

jesus

also you write with such poise and grace, just. it's beautiful. i could literally quote the entire thing - and i know i've been saying that a lot - but i really, really mean it. i feel like this is like. ~*~more than fic hahahaha, and more like. fucking literature AHAHAHLKldkfajsaskl.

love.

[casi_casi]

Ohhhhh, thank you so much, Neda. You're very, very generous. I really hope you like the last part, love. ♥

[katie_andrea]

wow, i love that Silva/Villa and Sernando stories are connected..it makes it exciting

[casi_casi]

Oh, all the stories are connected.

Thanks so much for reading and for the thorough feedback! It's always interesting to hear what people think of the characters. I'm glad you like Sergio, and I'm sorry you think Silva is heartless (I just think he's terrified).

[katie_andrea]

right..i think he's just scared, given his personality here, he's not one to invest much on emotions..

so i take it back, i don't think he's heartless, just, like you said, terrified ;)